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2011-05-28 17:16:29 Unexpected sentence let to more I appreciate all the constructive criticism. Please bare in mind this was my first story and I cam only get better I'm not normally poor at spelling but I didn't read though it all. But I hope you all enjoy reading i may wright a sequel if you like thanks again Brad x
2011-05-28 17:17:28 Unexpected sentence let to more Did it again cam was meant to be * can
2011-07-06 17:08:48 Eastenders Young Love Part 1 Great story, good spelling a few mistakes but no one is perfect loved it
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