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| 2012-08-28 04:19:44 |
Camp chapter one updated |
you know i've heard that before..someone once asked me why i don't write plays instead of storys..well i like the style its wrote in, i can read it, its easier for me to understand |
| 2012-08-24 03:52:27 |
Camp chapter one updated |
You know something, it occured to me last night that through all this arguing you have forgotten one main thing, grammar and spelling are not what make a story, its the plot, the characters, all the ideas to make a story what it is, it's about keeping the reader interested, making them feel like stopping reading would be a mistake as they might miss a major part, its about been able to connect with the reader through the words you chose to write |
| 2012-08-23 19:27:35 |
Camp chapter one updated |
You sir are an asshole, you have to hide behind the anonymous reader status, too scared to show the real you as you truly know that you could do no better |
| 2012-08-23 17:34:10 |
Camp chapter one updated |
I will admit one thing, maybe i do suck with my grammar and spelling, that has little to do with my education, that has more to do with where i live, the place i come from, the way we speak we generally use slang, i've tried not to incorporate any of my way of speaking into this story, okay i'll admit, maybe writing it while under influence of alchol isn't my smartest choice but i do stand by what i say, stupidity is something i have not got |
| 2012-08-23 17:25:34 |
Camp chapter one updated |
Under educated, nope definately aint, bit of an alcholic maybe, but an anonymous person like yourself may never call me under educated and you should never call me stupid for the one mistake people make is calling me something i truly aint, now you can show your face and let me hospitalise you for the rest of your natural born life or you can apologise |
| 2012-08-22 19:17:38 |
Harry Potter Chapter One Re-Write |
Anyone who want's another part to this story, well if you aint kidding then i'm sorry to inform you that part two may never get made, i have other storys to pursue |
| 2012-08-19 17:06:13 |
Camp the final chapter |
I know it's a terrible ending, terrible last chapter, terrible story altogether BUT i might see if i can make it a little better with better fight scenes, better love scenes between Jonah and Celeste, maybe a little scene to show how Jonah became the full sort of slave to Lance |
| 2012-08-16 19:56:20 |
Camp part three (unfinished) |
Just want to let people know that this chapter is almost complete, the ending has been completed and has got a nice little happy/sad ending, just got the beggining to write now and of course the middle part, few days at most and it will be done |
| 2012-08-14 18:46:37 |
Camp part three (unfinished) |
I posted it so people could have a sneak preview of what was to come you dope, it takes the mystery away from the story and it helps make sure people want more, read a tiny snippet of something then it usually helps makes people want to read more..so what is wrong with me, i'd say nothing, i made a smart move that your tiny brain couldn't comprehend |
| 2012-08-14 17:12:43 |
Camp part three (unfinished) |
Just so people understand, this story will not have any happy ending, it is made to show the reality of life, all these storys with the "and they lived happily ever after" endings are a bunch of bullshit, a happy ending in life would mean never dying and never been unhappy, so this story is made to show the real side of life |
| 2012-08-12 16:26:17 |
Camp part two |
Yeah just seemed right them breaking up, they are perfect for each other but thats what makes them more likely to break, every little thing can become an argument so breaking them apart was probably the best..third part..jesus now i have to start writing one |
| 2012-08-07 14:18:20 |
Camp (part two) unfinished version |
I know it's all wrong, will sort it out sooner or later, going to change where it begins, have it begin at the longest chapter and move all above it further down, will deal with grammar and spelling and all the faults people will have with it after i have wrote it |
| 2012-07-31 17:06:42 |
Camp (long story) |
Part two will be started (i mean i will start writing) this weekend at the very latest, if anyone would like to see some things added to the next part feel free to offer some ideas as they may help speed up the process |
| 2012-07-30 04:09:48 |
Camp (long story) |
Celeste, hmm well she ran away from camp to search for a way to rescue jonah, in the next part she finds a way to bring him back but at a cost |
| 2012-07-24 17:11:55 |
No name! |
Erm, thankyou i think |
| 2012-07-19 19:02:53 |
Masked magician |
Come on people, get some negative votes on this piece of..well piece of scrap to be fair |
| 2012-07-18 03:43:42 |
Death! |
Off who? if you say woody1991 thats me..i wrote this poem a long time ago and this isnt the first site ive posted it to..your-poetry, figment, facebook..a couple of sites this poem has seen in the many months i have owned it |
| 2012-07-17 15:01:41 |
Fallen angel |
Its two poems made into one, moved a few lines around and tryed to make it into one whole poem, give people something to read that isnt to do with sex |
| 2012-07-17 14:57:55 |
Heartbroken! |
Aye the feeling sucks but hey its life, got to suffer through a lot of pain to sooner or later realise that you dont need the person in your life anymore |
| 2012-07-17 05:21:31 |
Sleep around (cheap poem) |
Are you thick, you seriously think i would vote for this poem..if i did it would be a flipping negative vote..personally i dont really care for poetry..only wrote it as a joke |
| 2012-07-14 04:43:01 |
Harry Potter Chapter One Re-Write |
I am looking at a new story..away from the harry potter series
i know i made harry a douchebag..wasnt meant to go that way, it was meant to be a breakup/makeup sort of thing to make him seem like a nice guy when he apologised for acting like an asshole and promised to make it up to ginny |
| 2012-07-12 07:08:44 |
Sleep around (cheap poem) |
Well from 7 votes there is a 57.1% rating which would mean people actually liked it and more people must of liked it than hated it or the rating would be lower than low
thanks, not meant to be cute but sure |
| 2012-07-11 18:48:07 |
Sleep around (cheap poem) |
Asif anyone actually read this poem..think im more shocked that people liked it |
| 2012-07-10 16:21:12 |
Harry Potter Chapter One Re-Write |
To be fair everyone is giving it a negative rating..its easy to change and make harry seem like a completely perfect guy who doesnt care that ginny cheated..can easily cut ron out..just make it about ginny/hermoine/harry through the whole chapter |
| 2012-07-10 13:31:17 |
Harry Potter Chapter One Re-Write |
But this one was a failure..chapter two wont be any better..more sex sure..but still i failed with this one |
| 2012-07-10 04:58:56 |
Harry Potter Chapter One Re-Write |
Thats only chapter one..probably wont write chapter two to be fair..was going to have harry return after been beaten by a gang of death eaters..have ginny nurse him back to health and him try to make things right with her |
| 2012-07-09 20:32:28 |
Harry Potter Chapter One Re-Write |
I'm sorry about the lack of sex, there will be more in chapter 2, well i hope there will but i suck at this whole writing so..never know |
| 2012-07-04 18:18:04 |
Harry potter unfinished re-write |
On the final stretch now..hopefully by tommorow night i will post the re-write to chapter one |
| 2012-07-04 13:36:59 |
Harry potter unfinished re-write |
True..without ron harry would probably be in azkaban..he would be a completely different person and i dont think he would of ever met hermoine..plus there would be no ginny |
| 2012-07-04 13:25:10 |
Harry potter unfinished re-write |
In the end i think harry needs everyone more than he cares to admit..like you said without ron/hermoine he would of never gotten as far as he did..hermoine with her knowledge and ron with his..well his stupid luck has helped him more times than he can tell..so without friends he wouldnt be anybody :/ he needs people and ginny just happens to be one person..he needs more |
| 2012-07-04 11:36:46 |
Harry potter unfinished re-write |
Where as harry..although he loves ginny..he will always do anything to help his friends when it comes down to it |
| 2012-07-04 11:18:45 |
Harry potter unfinished re-write |
To be fair..when has anything ever been fair to ron..thought it might be nice for hermoine to have options but ron be one of those guys who would never cheat even if permission was given :) |
| 2012-07-04 10:14:19 |
Harry potter unfinished re-write |
True but i was thinking of saving luna..maybe make her harrys/ginnys..that way ginny gets to be part of a couple and gets her best friend ginny whenever she wants aswell as having harry when she needs |
| 2012-07-04 05:04:57 |
Harry potter unfinished re-write |
Was thinking along those lines..letting ron watch her and luna have fun together then let him take her ass :/ |
| 2012-07-03 15:33:21 |
Harry potter unfinished re-write |
see how it goes..she does cheat with ginny hence the letters..harry dumps ginny..ron dumps hermoine..harry sleeps with luna..ron and hermoine talk it through after she offers ron something special :) harry gets beaten without the use of magic..ginny looks after him..he wakes up everynight and trys to tell her he is sorry but collapses before he can |
| 2012-07-03 15:14:45 |
Harry potter unfinished re-write |
To be fair you aren't the only one, i don't know where im taking them two..maybe things will change between them after hermoine realises she likes girls more..maybe ron won't want to be with her and will do his own dissapearing act leaving ginny/hermoine/harry alone to become a threesome relationship :/ we will both have to wait and see haha
thats an idea..death eaters follow harry..always attacking him to avenge voldermort..they follow him to lunas house and after he leaves they jump him and leave him for dead..luna hears the commotion and rushes out to find harry beaten and apparates him to the only place she knows is safe..the burrow |
| 2012-07-03 13:30:57 |
Harry potter unfinished re-write |
yeah, hermoine wont be having too much girl/girl fun..thats going to be more luna/ginny..but i still have to find a way to get harry to take ginny back..have harry sleep with luna and have harry appear at the burrow all beaten, broken and barely breathing..have ginny nurse him back to health in her room while also having some pleasure with him while he is asleep :/ |
| 2012-07-03 10:18:56 |
Harry potter unfinished re-write |
Can do the foursome..if i make sure ginny pairs with luna while ron has fun with hermoine then have ginny with hermoine while he has fun with luna and to finish can have all three of the lasses have a threesome while ron just watches
i do want to do a ginny/luna/harry scene but later on..most of them choices given will be later on as there is still a part i need to do..harry/ginny..she has her way with him while he sleeps |
| 2012-07-03 09:44:17 |
Harry potter unfinished re-write |
Not big on the ron/ginny part..not saying i wouldn't write it BUT there are other threesomes..ron/harry/hermoine..ginny/luna/hermoine..ron/hermoine/luna..ginny/harry/luna..there is also the whole luna/ginny/hermoine/harry or ron |
| 2012-07-03 04:59:39 |
Harry potter unfinished re-write |
Don't get too excited as that scene may OR may not happen..to be fair i don't know where im going with this story..going to take it as it comes and see what feels right.
i can change the minor details once i have finished writing it, give ginny bigger breasts while hermoine can happily stay whatever size i chose for her |
| 2012-06-28 18:38:15 |
Harry potter chapter one |
Deal..no harry/hermoine..if everyone stops asking for certain things i will add some different stuff..ron/hermoine..ginny/hermoine..harry/luna..ginny/hermoine/luna..ginny/luna/harry |
| 2012-06-28 09:56:02 |
Harry potter chapter one |
I seriously dont know how to win with you people..so far its have harry/hermoine then dont..have ron/hermoine..harry/ginny..then others want ron with luna and harry not with ginny :/ seriously..how do i win |
| 2012-06-28 04:53:28 |
Harry potter chapter one |
How about harry and hermoine..harry, ginny and hermoine threesome? that any better |
| 2012-06-26 15:16:06 |
Harry potter chapter one |
Thankyou for actually giving some positive feedback..it is my first official story and i will add part two as i re-write in a new format where it is easier to read..gaps wont be a problem as i have been told my style is made for plays so the gaps will be there in screenplay format..next part will be added in the next couple of days..hopefully anyway..see how it goes..as for the orgy..sorry that part wont be there..instead there is ginny giving harry a blowjob while he sleeps..ron/hermoine full on sex scene and maybe an hermoine/ginny scene |
| 2012-06-26 08:45:12 |
Harry potter chapter one |
I will repost this story in another format then, more of a script writing but for some people it is easier to read, i will sort the punctuation out as i go through the story okay.
as for the anonymous reader, how about stop been anonymous and why dont you do better? post something and see if you can do any better..just because i didnt pass my english class due to a minor problem i have doesnt mean this is impossible to read
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| 2012-06-26 08:38:11 |
Harry potter chapter one |
I will repost this story in another format then, more of a script writing but for some people it is easier to read, i will sort the punctuation out as i go through the story okay.
as for the anonymous reader, how about stop been anonymous and why dont you do better? post something and see if you can do any better..just because i didnt pass my english class due to a minor problem i have doesnt mean this is impossible to read
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