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| 2011-02-10 03:16:25 |
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i dont mind obsenties while making love, it does show she is enjoying it and your doing the right things to her. it may kill the romance but good passionate kissing etc after can make up for that. my opion like klaxx, each to the own i guess |
| 2010-12-11 18:30:56 |
SCHOOL DAYS |
anon take a look at the top of the page its fiction IDIOT, not a true story |
| 2010-12-11 18:30:46 |
SCHOOL DAYS |
anon take a look at the top of the page its fiction IDIOT, not a true story |
| 2010-11-01 10:09:58 |
Show Daddy |
sorry to have posted so many of the same comment site messed up and didnt put them up straight away so i carried on with another, and another etc etc |
| 2010-11-01 07:38:20 |
Show Daddy |
I agree with the others I imaged a 5-10 yr old, maybe you were ashamed of saying 7 yr old incase of what ppl thought but anything goes here even babies.
I had a stirring in my track suit till I read 15 then I lost interest.
I suggest you have it taken off, change the age, add more chapters and post the story again.
Other then that quite good but too short.
Hope my comments arent to neg for you. If you want to contact me the c_oaklee@yahoo.co.uk
Or under the name writerxx.
I cant use the stories forum
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| 2010-11-01 07:38:07 |
Show Daddy |
I agree with the others I imaged a 5-10 yr old, maybe you were ashamed of saying 7 yr old incase of what ppl thought but anything goes here even babies.
I had a stirring in my track suit till I read 15 then I lost interest.
I suggest you have it taken off, change the age, add more chapters and post the story again.
Other then that quite good but too short.
Hope my comments arent to neg for you. If you want to contact me the c_oaklee@yahoo.co.uk
Or under the name writerxx.
I cant use the stories forum
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| 2010-11-01 07:32:27 |
Show Daddy |
i agree with the others i imaged a 5-10 yr old till i saw 15, that spoilt it for me other then that i liked it, maybe you were a little ashamed to say 7yr girl incase of what people thought, but anything goes here, even babies, i suggest you have it taken off, change the age, add more to it, and do more chapters.
the first couple of chapters had my cock stirring in my track suit but 15 i went limp again. hope my comments arent too negative for you.
if you want to contact me the c_oaklee@yahoo.co.uk
or under the name of writerxx. i cant use the forum inbox. |
| 2010-09-10 03:06:59 |
AN UNCLE AND HIS NIECE, FULL STORY |
sorry unknown i disagree with you, i have seen the way the 11-15 yr old girls around my way act, that age they are just being to get interested in men/boys, under 10 maybe not so interested. when i was 10 i wasnt interested in girls, but that changed when i hit puberty, and the same goes for girls, if it didnt with you then you are very rare.
more proof can be seen if you arent convinced look at stickham web cams, any ammount of girls on there just to eager to get their panies off and show the guys, some as young as 6 but most 10-15.
sorry to bust you bubble, perhaps your sister isnt as innocent as you may think. |
| 2010-09-04 04:04:40 |
A NEW START PART 2 |
part three being validated |
| 2010-09-03 05:59:33 |
Peek a boo |
i liked the story i dont know if i can find part 2 if there is one, but i was jealous of red, as you must have been, but as others have said, i would tell mom, get him fucked off out of it, and take your sister all for yourself.
now i shall look for part 2 |
| 2010-08-22 07:10:58 |
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biglw17
ive tried contacting you via site but im not sure you have my message plz answer if you have. |
| 2010-07-25 17:30:56 |
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probably heard her dad calling her names and swearing in front of her, thats probably how she knew how to swear. |
| 2010-07-15 11:15:43 |
Granddaughters like to play #1 |
some readers i noticed were rather rude calling the author and readers pedo bastards. can i ask a simple question....if they didnt want to read about gramps/fathers/brothers etc fucking little relatives/daughters/sistersgrandaughters etc then why pick a subject like INCEST to read.surely there are other subjects that would please these people. the moral i trying to make is IF YOU DONT WANT TO READ ABOUT YOUNG DAUGHTERS/SISTERS ETC BEING FUCKED BY THE GRAMPS/FATHERS AND BROTHERS DONT READ INCEST STORIES!!!! |
| 2010-06-28 18:02:58 |
AN UNCLE AND HIS NIECE, PART 3, THE CONCLUSION |
to all those wanting part 4 i shall write it after this summers school break, its a true story, part 3 brings it up to date, the final part if there is one will be posted in september 2010. thanks
chrisruxx |
| 2010-06-25 05:46:25 |
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i agree the BO BO, has long as you can understand the story and its erotic then what the fuck does it matter. i get comments about my spelling etc but if the major part of the readers like it i dont worry to much.
any way erotically told story plenty of detail, and hope theres more to cum. the guy who commented about his sister and her friends hes one lucky fucker, wish i could take his place, perhaps he should write about it.
GREAT STORY KEEP EM CUMMING and us male readers to |
| 2010-06-17 02:59:46 |
EMMA`S LAP TOP |
To reader, love to hear what happened when your dad caught you, write about it please |