Comments from HaygoodGent
|2011-05-31 17:26:23||Moms Sleepmask Secrets||The story was well thought out but did indeed contain too many grammatical errors which detracts from a good read.|
|2011-07-28 11:10:30||Corp Whore||You hid your age which was and obvious move to hide the fact you're underage for this site. Your writing is clear proof of it. Cancel your membership and forget about a writing career - you stink, plain and simple!|
|2011-09-16 11:19:45||Mommy knows best part 1||Somewriter21, the first comment probably was based mostly on the poor grammar and spelling. If you submit another story (and I hope you do continue with this one), be sure to have an editor review the story or use a Spell-Check routine as with Microsoft Word. The story seems a bit rushed while lacking adequate details. Hope this is received as constructive advice and encourages you to contine writing.|
|2011-12-10 15:36:11||Teenage sweetheart and Mom||This is so poorly written I stopped reading after just a few lines.
Would vote it a -10.