Comments from solarxxxsteve

Date Story title Comment
2010-07-23 14:18:18 Vacation For Two - Monday The whole situation, with brother and sister, very unlikely (although you never can tell these days how strange some people are) but this is just fiction, and well written.
2010-10-25 20:09:59 Summer Breeze. you know this only needs a little editing to be the first part of a series...

yes it ended unexpectedly, but fill in more detail at the beginning (tip: go east on the 1/2 sentence paragraphs) and since you have left it open for continuation why not continue it?