Comments from docolude
|2010-05-29 02:51:22||I would like it if you continued this... maybe something about Jason and Travis or Davis... since Jason seems to have a thing for them|
|2010-06-27 05:07:04||BRADY AND I||Forgive the caps... didn't realize I was writing and caps. as for the misspelled words, this was the first and only draft of the story. obviously never revised.
Please don't let the caps fool you. I will try to delete it and post a better version. with regular caps and less misspellings
|2010-07-02 00:05:38||BRADY AND I||I will finish the story and post the entire thing with corrections and I will make sure that the caps and grammar/spelling errors are fixed... Thanks for reading|