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Comment |
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| 2012-08-09 10:19:07 |
My journey to Crete |
Also, i found your story used "rod" too much. Try using a variety of words. Shaft, cock, etc. No one likes hearing the same one over and over. But other than that..it was alright. |
| 2012-08-09 10:17:35 |
My journey to Crete |
Yea...smart thing to post on a site like this "John and Beth"...on this site no one wants to hear about anyone's trips, ailments, and DEFINITELY not "god". If he "transforms" us into the "likeness of his son"...then Jesus must have been Hell on Wheels.. |
| 2012-03-27 23:08:13 |
Submission At Its Best |
Alright i think that lets me know i should write a chapter two :P i'll try to write it within the next week or so, in the middle of moving so it might be awhile. But keep checking back. :) |
| 2012-03-27 04:47:25 |
The Suprise |
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE <3 |
| 2012-03-27 00:29:49 |
The Darkness; My Beginning |
Keep going! Everyone wants you to continue, so continue! |
| 2011-12-03 02:10:16 |
Fantasies Come Alive |
Sorry KaedenDude, i've already got one. :) |
| 2011-11-27 23:58:21 |
Fantasies Come Alive |
You're all great fans :( just sayin. |
| 2011-11-27 23:56:07 |
Master's New Pet |
Thanks sooo much. I'm sorry i haven't been keeping up with my writing, i'll try and get some "me" time and write more. :) i love you alllllll |
| 2011-10-10 00:34:23 |
Fantasies Come Alive |
Heh. Thanks everyone :) you should all go read my other stories and vote :) |
| 2011-09-24 14:13:02 |
Fantasies Come Alive |
Thanks! :D
And that's how i felt for a long time...reading any story with a Master, i'd wish i had one. Now i finally do!!!! It's great once you find one. |
| 2011-08-29 20:29:42 |
Michelle Part 4 |
please continue this story. Make maybe another series, through the series ? Have some about Susan and Tom...and add more of them together, and more of Michelle and Rich. That would be awesome. Love these!!! |
| 2011-08-27 17:48:37 |
Taming The Succubus. 2 |
you should really continue the story, like get into the nasty parts. There's no sex in these so far, which makes it hard to keep reading. |
| 2011-08-27 17:34:18 |
Taming The Succubus. |
good so far, just try getting it proof read before posting it...there are a few grammar mistakes. |
| 2011-08-25 18:07:43 |
Master's New Pet |
Thank you. I'm just waiting for the inspiration to continue it :) |
| 2011-08-25 18:06:06 |
My story |
Sorry i tried to change the names, but i guess i forgot a few places. Thnx for pointing it out |
| 2011-08-13 15:06:19 |
Revenge on Katelyn |
good story, just learn to paragraph. It's easier to read. |
| 2011-06-18 21:17:12 |
Introductions |
Heyy this was good. And yea, just spelling isn't great. Part 2 ?! |
| 2011-04-14 21:46:48 |
My Introduction to Incest |
uhm...there's a huge difference when it's two KIDS fucking...but an adult fucking a child is just plain wrong. And nasty.
Good story by the way. |
| 2010-11-19 20:58:02 |
open windows |
Very good story. I liked it alot. But the knife threat was a bit much i find. |
| 2010-11-19 20:57:39 |
open windows |
Very good story. I liked it alot. But the knife threat was a bit much i find. |
| 2010-11-12 19:34:08 |
That Night - Chapter 2 |
Both of the stories are very good. I really enjoyed them. These are the kind of stories i like to read, so thank you for writing! |
| 2010-11-12 19:33:51 |
That Night - Chapter 2 |
Both of the stories are very good. I really enjoyed them. These are the kind of stories i like to read, so thank you for writing! |
| 2010-06-23 11:25:51 |
Being a Good Neighbor |
Why does grammar matter?! SERIOUSLY. These are SEX STORIES. These stories are written to please people, not written for their grammar and writing skills. Stop critisizing. Go read somewhere else if you're not interested in the actual story. |