Comments from Jack_The_Lad14
|2010-05-10 18:15:35||My Baby Sister : Prologue||This comment is from the author.
For the Record I'd like to say, I wrote both the first part and the prologue of this story on my iPhone, it is much harder to write with than a computer, and has no spell check function.
Regardless of this, I agree I should have checked it more thoroughly.
Thankyou for the comments although many have complained about spelling and such when I would have prefered comments about the storyline, and how you appreciated imagery.
Jack The Lad