Comments from Chagrin
|2008-10-17 18:14:08||You have a great series going. I especially enjoyed part 4 when you taught Katy how to masturbate when she was in bed. I would love to read about Katy learning about her asshole, like you eating it, or using the dildo on it, or... well, I won't try to steer your story or anything, but awesome job so far. I really want to read part 6.|
|2008-10-17 18:15:25||(ack, that last comment was from me, I thought it would put my name next to it, but it just says reader) *rolls eyes*
Still, keep writing!
|2010-07-23 19:13:52||First Time||I like how the prologue and epilogue switch point of views. I think it helps that you show the thoughts of both characters, yet stays first person for maximum impact. Very well done.|
|2010-07-23 20:25:05||The Beach||Just as good, if not better than Part 1. Getting to know the characters more helps aid the imagination and the connection to the reader, so I am glad this is a continuation of the previous story. I enjoyed reading it; I just wish the sex could have gone on longer. Nothing quite like a loooong tease :)|
|2010-07-26 22:30:11||Late Arrival||Even more amazing than the first two. I could imagine it better than the previous ones, which is of course a plus :) With each story, you are becoming a better and better writer. I found the very end the most stimulating, and I love how it's both romantic and erotic at once. Fantastic!|