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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2011-11-30 21:54:18 |
Was It Wrong? Part 1 |
As an older Australian guy I can understand the conflicting emotions. It was written in a rush of words. The grammar wasn't perfect but hey who cares. It sounded like a true life experience to me... |
| 2011-08-28 21:54:08 |
DADDY'S HORNY DAUGHTER |
Excellent story. More space and better punctuation would make it even better. Enjoyed it immensly tho |
| 2011-08-28 21:53:32 |
DADDY'S HORNY DAUGHTER |
Excellent story. More space and better punctuation would make it even better. Enjoyed it immensly tho |
| 2011-08-24 22:56:52 |
Master's New Pet |
Excellent story of training and I look forward to more. You are now on my favs list. |
| 2011-08-24 22:55:32 |
Master's New Pet |
Excellent story of training and I look forward to more. You are now on my favs list. |
| 2011-01-11 20:00:34 |
Fascinated with hypnotism- Chapter Three |
Sensational little run of 3 stories, very well written |
| 2010-10-01 01:15:41 |
changing crystal pt.3 |
Excellent story girl. You are lucky to have been so well trained. |
| 2010-04-28 20:16:57 |
Solitude Interrupted |
That was probably the most entrancing, beguiling story I have ever read on this site. The twist at the end just made it all the better, well done.
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