Comments from WantSumCandyLittleGirl
|2010-05-23 19:14:22||Excellent story, well written. Keep them coming|
|2010-05-23 19:18:36||Excellent story, well written. Keep them coming|
|2010-05-23 23:07:56||My Daughter Loves Her Daddy||Is it Kelli or Katie? What about separating the paragraphs? What about adding punctuation? And since when do girls getting laid for the first time say "OMG" and not "Oh my God"?
The story had it's ups and downs and needed a bit of work to make it more enjoyable to read.
|2010-05-23 23:46:57||LONG WINTER WEEKEND WITH THE GIRLS Part 1||Well written, although once Dolores referred to her Daddy? Good story, good plot, well laid out. Any chance of part 2?|
|2010-05-31 13:54:16||Good Little 3rd Grade Girl||4 years of story telling is great. This is another in a long list of excellent stories. I hope there are sequels.
And for the idiots who don't understand, it's all a fantasy. Get over yourselves.