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Comments from crotar

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2010-04-30 18:53:46 Long Lost Lovers... I would agree with the other two comments. The past tense writing is interesting but you missed a lot of words at the end of sentences. I do love the story though and even with the mistakes i read the whole thing and wanted to see how it ended.
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