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| 2012-06-30 02:21:59 |
I CAN'T RESIST MY NEIGHBOR-OR HER TEENAGE GIRLS!-CHAPTER 5 |
I was against adding the two younger sisters, especially since it would almost make Tony look like their dad. However, my mind changed after this chapter. Keep going! |
| 2011-03-16 22:37:50 |
The English Teacher |
of course its corny : p most of these are, but thanks!! |
| 2010-07-06 23:45:27 |
A Very Difficult Daughter - Chap 2 - "It's your body Sally" |
and I only say not as great because you ended it right when it was picking up...but that's just good story telling |
| 2010-07-06 23:44:30 |
A Very Difficult Daughter - Chap 2 - "It's your body Sally" |
this one wasn't as great as the first one...BUT amazing builder for the third installment...good job with your stories, man! |
| 2010-07-06 22:07:33 |
Drew and Nikki: Step Sibling Love part 1 |
Thanks for the comments, guys. I'm working on part two and I took the advice of the one person who told me to tell it in the past tense. Hopefully you'll like the new one just as much as this one, if not more. |
| 2010-04-11 23:30:41 |
The English Teacher |
To the first guy: seriously, thanks for your comment, I did write it and publish it quick without doing much proofreading...just ran it through spellcheck. Sorry it was too distracting for you.
The rest of you: thanks for the comments. I will write another one in the near future. |