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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2011-04-08 21:11:58 |
Arranged Marriage |
This is fictional fantasy.... if you dont like the theme then stop reading stories in the themes you dont like!! As for racist? WTF are you on about, Im Pakistani |
| 2011-01-08 20:10:31 |
Public Display |
Amazing... wish to read more, u still with bradon? wats his number? |
| 2010-08-26 07:12:22 |
Tales of An Internet Whore |
To annoymous reader 22/aug 2010 -
Thank you very much for your comment, firstly for clarity.... I am a female.... not sure what else to say about that. It is disappointing that you did not like the story, i guess you have your opinion. However, I wonder why you chose "Dark Fantasy" if you are into more softer sex (which my husband gives me alot of by the way!)
The whole point of erotica is to explore ones imagination and puut them into words. It is all fantasy and it appears from the emotion you showed, you have a hard time distingushing reality and fantasy
Have a nice day! |
| 2010-08-22 10:34:45 |
LaWhore in Lahore |
Thank u anoymous..... I was a bit heartbroken that i never got comments, even though the ratings were high. Will be booking my ticket to the USA shortly ;) |
| 2010-05-15 13:03:58 |
A Mans World |
woooow thanks reader! |
| 2010-04-16 16:42:50 |
Tales of An Internet Whore |
Woooow, what a great compliment - Thanks Reader x |
| 2010-04-12 06:48:17 |
Tales of An Internet Whore |
where did you get the impression there was animal sex? It never said beastility.... |
| 2010-04-08 20:37:19 |
A Mans World |
thanks reader, much appreciated |
| 2010-04-08 20:36:31 |
Tales of An Internet Whore |
oh my days thanks reader, thats made my day!! :) xxxx |
| 2010-04-07 12:11:38 |
Tales of An Internet Whore |
Thanks Mike.... Hmmm, I suck!!! LOL
Now words and insults aside, you are fair in your criticism, a few said this on other sites, the context and circumstances overide the actual sex scenes.... this is a sex site/sex story and in the words of another critic, its like a magician wanting to watch Harry Potter for the magic rather than the effects!
Thansk for taking the time out to comment, although coming twice was good hey! |
| 2010-04-06 00:04:55 |
A Mans World |
that is fair to say, this story is in 7 chapters and has been posted (by me) in 7 seperate chapters - but people moaned trying to find the other chapters on sites, like this that dont have direct links
It is true that after chapter 5 i struggle, there has to be an end, and i stuggle ending it... many stories are half done on my hard drive
Thanks for feedback x |
| 2010-04-05 21:12:15 |
A Mans World |
You sound disappointed, what could have been improved? |
| 2010-04-03 10:02:53 |
Fiona forced onto webcam.......at work!! |
Nice story, straight written, can imagine u telling me this down the pub!!, no fluffly bits
PS: its not incest! |