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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2010-04-05 17:09:45 |
One Summers Day |
If You Want To Slag Me Off Atleast Have The Bollocks To Not Do It Anonymously |
| 2010-04-05 08:25:11 |
the new child |
Holy Shit, This is your best story? You use four different names for the girl including a male name and also use Pi as how many hours you fuck for, YOU ARE SHIT!!! |
| 2010-04-05 08:18:36 |
what ever happenz happens |
What A Load Of Total Shit: It Repeated about 5 times and the spelling was appauling, Also the fact that the author didnt use speech marks was astonishing totaly unfluent
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| 2010-04-04 19:49:03 |
Boys and girls together (5) |
I Absolutely love your stories but dog fucking honestly is rank im telling you John Should Get With Jennie Cuz It would e Cool And I Kind Of Have A Thing For Her. LOL |
| 2010-04-04 19:45:19 |
Boys and Girls together (6) |
Good Storyline and great writing skills, How about another chapter?. I Would Prefere If John And Jennie Got Together again and she stopped dog fucking cuz, to put it blatently, its rank. Other Than The Dog Fucking its great story |
| 2010-04-04 19:38:02 |
One Summers Day |
Reply to The First Comment: If your 14 then what are you doing on a porn site you stupid motherfuc*er.
Reply to the second comment: I Never Was Very Good At English At Svhool |
| 2010-04-02 17:05:39 |
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I Love this story its one of my favourites ever |
| 2010-04-01 16:47:51 |
My Sister Amanda Part 1 |
Its A good story, im like you ive just finished my first story but i agree with earlier comments, you could use some paragraphs |