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Comments from Online_Insomniac

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Date Story title Comment
2011-09-07 22:10:46 Foxy Lady I'd really like to thank you guys for your comments. If you've read my other story, which you should, you'd know that I'm not exactly a prolific writer. I'll try to work as fast as I can on the sequel to Foxy Lady, but finding the time to sit down and write is hard.

And please comment, any advice from other authors is always welcome, just remember I'm kinda new at this.

And please vote!!!! But if you leave a negatgive vote, please be so kind as to leave a comment explaining why. I like to know what people don't like so I can fix it. I can't fix it if I don't know!

Anyways, thanks for all the awesome comments!

Online_Insomniac
2011-09-15 22:44:11 My Ebony Girl Maybe you should listen to the 'freak spell judges'. Am I envious of the experience, hell yes. That's beside the point. It's a good story, but I really suggest some spell checking and spacing, if only to make the story easier to follow. You do that, and keep with the story, and you'll get a positive rating out of me.
2012-03-26 20:43:22 The New Teacher Damn fine writing. Well written, it flows well, and described in fine detail. All in all, an extremely worthy beginning to a phenomenal series. Keep up the good work.
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