Comments from demck23
|2011-04-13 09:09:53||Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 1 6th Year Begins||well I realy enjoy it. As for them saying that you should stay with the books line. DON"T. Allways said that Harry shoud have got hermy & Ron with Luna. Ginny with Longbottom. But keep it going & make it a little longer. I think for a 1st time you did very well. I'm not a writer but read alot. say keep it going Dave|
|2011-04-14 14:03:12||Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 2 - Cho's Jealousy||All I say it if you can't say anything nice don't say anything at all if you don't put your name to it. As for me & realy enjoyed it & want to read more . would love to see harry doing a group of ladies who wanted to be banged bye him with him knocking them all up. it should inclued both cho & hermy . allways said that Harry should have got her not Ron . Thats what alot of my daughters friend felt about it. I took her & 12 of her friends to the last movie part 1. they all have read the books allway though. they all didn't like how she did it to setting up Ron with Hermy.
Just hope you keep it going
|2011-04-14 14:24:20||Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 3 - Ron goes Looney||This one I liked that it was Ron to get Luna but wished he had cream pied her deeply. the next for him should be lavener Brown who he was shonging in the books. have him rapeing her too. then having him be found out with him marrying them both as he's a pure blood & so is Luna but not Lav. but having him with them both|
|2011-04-16 09:50:03||Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 4 - Part 1 of 3 - The Joys of Quidditch||Great work can't wait until the next part keep it going.to those who don't like it just don't say anything. I like this Harry better then how he was in the books. Dave|
|2011-04-18 12:54:30||Jasmine: Latina Wife||Great story loved it wished you had told more of the action as he filled her up. kust wish he had creamed inside her giving her a cream pie for you. Had taken some hot pics of the action so he could do her more in the holiday time. what to read more of your story of her actions|