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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-10-07 22:35:07 |
My Fathers' Boss |
then why post twice and also still need to read what cuckold means |
| 2012-06-20 17:59:47 |
Mom Takes Control |
I think a bit more about the sexual encounter will cheer up some of the bad reviews (and a little grammar check). Also, if putting in chapter form then please just categorize that chapter - i.e. this part has nothing to do with cuckolding.
I'd still like to read more if it eventually get's around to cuckolding, A favorite fantasy of mine. |
| 2011-12-25 01:53:19 |
Jeannie's Story |
I think the previous commenter needs to understand what the work cuckold means and decide not to read any of those stories. I liked the story and certainly enjoy the fantasy of being the boyfriend here. |
| 2011-12-12 03:01:30 |
The Lesbian Next Door |
I didn't see this as too long or that the car discussion was too bad. Really though, I don't understand the complaint about a guy writing about two gals. If the commenter is reading that part as part of the edit perhaps they need to just not make a comment. I don't read stories like this often but found it perfectly fine, even with a possible issues if from the english as a first language audience. |
| 2011-12-10 20:58:30 |
halloween dare |
I liked it and the errors didn't deter my hard-on |
| 2011-12-10 20:55:22 |
Black mailing my manager |
I little more details about you and her physically and about the acts themselves and this would be worth a positive rating
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| 2011-12-04 03:21:42 |
My Wife Made Me a Cock Sucker |
Nice, about how I wish it would happen here at home. |
| 2011-11-17 03:41:02 |
Seduced by fruit and chocolate Part 1 |
Nice story - but please read the definition of cuckold. Not even close on that category with this installment. |
| 2011-11-02 19:18:14 |
habits are controlling |
Nice start - but cuckolding??? Better to use less categories unless it's really to topic of your story. |
| 2011-10-19 10:38:59 |
she's training me |
A nice start of a good story. I'm not sure I agree that more dialog is needed but it wouldn't hurt. If the dialog is going to be short then perhaps a longer part of the story. My real issue is in story classification. I look for cuckold stories and right now it's still just a dom/sub type story. I'd use the cuckold classification when there is actual cuckold play/discussion. |
| 2011-09-28 10:38:57 |
Black Cock Dominance of a Sissy White Boy |
I liked it and agree a bit short. Perhaps another chapter of how you got to wear women's clothes. |
| 2011-09-28 10:17:13 |
Forced to Watch My Wife |
Perhaps like the critics before me say, the way it started might have a different outcome in real life, but this is a story. Although my wife would never play the female part mentioned and I would not be happy if something like this was thrust upon me, I'd probably still be hard as a rock afterwards. I think if you added this was a topic for a discussion once before then it might have made the transition a bit more believable for those wanting that. That didn't stop me from enjoying the story. |
| 2011-09-27 09:22:45 |
He Likes to Suck, She Likes to Watch |
It was a fine story for what it was about - could have used a few more adjectives and perhaps a sequel instead of the last paragraph being short - but we are nitpicking. |
| 2011-09-18 21:19:26 |
The cuckold. |
I can't say this story is a failure, you do have a select audience and probably most are like me (male) who may want more details in the sharing or degrading sexual components of what is happening and less on the story build-up. For me, it was a bit refreshing to get a bit more of that but I'd still like a bit more of the details as well. As a married man I explore this fantasy through stories alone as my wife has no interests in this area and this isn't the type of thing get's experience on the side. Please keep up your spirits. |
| 2011-09-15 09:46:42 |
Forced to be a Fuck Doll |
I think a bit longer into the first sexual encounter would have worked a bit better. I'll read the next chapter tonight. You could then have a chapter per day or per encounter with each guy/group of guys. |
| 2011-04-14 00:27:35 |
Robin has problems |
Maybe no sequel but definitely worth keeping stories like this coming. Thanks for sharing |
| 2011-01-28 11:52:42 |
Devil worship |
I nice story with a good build up. I didn't get how it went from David fucking her ass to how she had been giving/receiving with you/husband - which kinda threw me (not reading as a short story critic - I had to just stop when I read that and go back to see if I missed something). I'd certainly like to read a sequel. Thanks for sharing. |
| 2011-01-28 11:47:39 |
Devil worship |
Not a bad story in build up - but I didn't get the leap from David doing doing her ass to how you had been involved fucking in the next paragraph (like it had been happening awhile). I would certainly read a sequel. Thanks for sharing. |