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| 2013-04-02 10:14:45 |
Crashing a High School party |
Not a bad story at all. |
| 2012-08-30 04:53:30 |
Apologetic Sex |
Very VERY good for a first story. I hope to read more stories from you. - ELP |
| 2012-08-15 23:38:13 |
CAW 12: Mr Phillips and Miss Jasmine |
I see Rowan Atkinson playing the role of Mr. Phillips here. Jasmine would be harder to cast because she is such a beauty and no mere actress comes to mind. Great mix of sex and comedy. - ELP |
| 2012-07-11 10:21:53 |
Digger |
She just left me hanging too! - ELP |
| 2012-06-01 13:04:33 |
The Strange Case of the Cum-Stained Beds |
Despite the poor sportsmanship that you have shown toward me, I won't cast a negative vote on this very dull and ordinary story but I can't give it a positive. What goes around, comes around and here it is. I am sure that it will do as well, in this challenge, as all of your "efforts" have done in the past. |
| 2012-04-03 21:11:41 |
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Not to my taste but well done. |
| 2012-03-07 13:13:30 |
Married to my sister |
Very good story. True? You wrote it very well. You should post this on the story forum. |
| 2012-03-01 01:37:03 |
LOVE TRAIN |
Very good (and good and hot) story! Next time I'll take the train! |
| 2012-02-29 19:13:24 |
The Shape Of Things To Cum...? |
Very interesting and unique story. I enjoyed it a whole lot. |
| 2012-02-28 12:57:08 |
Phantom: A Love Story. |
Very good. Another tale of the macabre from the master of that genre. I give it both thumbs up. |
| 2012-02-24 11:14:21 |
Brother And Sister "MEGAN'S GIFT" |
Thank you! I didn't know that people were still reading this. |
| 2012-02-17 15:13:27 |
For My Woman's Love |
A very good story told by one of the better writers here. It was well worth the reading. |
| 2012-02-16 15:58:54 |
CAW 10 - The Banger Sisters |
A very nice entry for CAW10. It had some hot sex in it. |
| 2012-02-15 18:12:17 |
CAW 10 *The Best Decision I Made* |
Very good reading. Nice detail. I enjoyed this story. |
| 2012-02-15 01:26:08 |
The Darkmoon Faire (part 2) |
Very good story./ I liked it a lot. |
| 2012-01-06 17:51:13 |
My journey pt 1- (Last months of High School) |
Very good story. I see nothing wrong with it at all. |
| 2011-12-16 22:55:10 |
Man of the HOuse Pt4 |
Very good writing. A real joy to read. It's good to be Daddy! |
| 2011-12-16 22:51:19 |
Some Guy is Fucking My Wife? |
Sizzling story. I don't know if Brad can really trust her though. |
| 2011-12-01 18:43:00 |
Young Indy Jones & the Gift of Wet Pussies |
I like my steaks medium rare but hamburgers and stories I love well done and this story was a rare treat! - ELP |
| 2011-11-29 11:35:33 |
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Very conversational style. I liked it. |
| 2011-11-28 17:56:34 |
Gift Unwrapping |
Wonderfull story of youth and sexual discovery! I enjoyed this a whole lot. Great writing. |
| 2011-11-27 13:34:46 |
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Very hot! VERY erotic and VERY well done. I enjoyed this story a lot. |
| 2011-11-25 19:49:12 |
Brother And Sister "MEGAN'S GIFT" |
Thank you, THANK you! I wish I knew who you were so I could thank you by name. |
| 2011-11-20 11:17:57 |
Ramadan. |
A very interesting tale. |
| 2011-08-30 11:23:37 |
My cousin and I |
Very good story. I enjoyed it. |
| 2011-07-20 18:59:22 |
Fleeting Encounters |
Fantastic story and fantastic writer! My hat is off to you. This was a first-rate story. |
| 2011-07-14 23:39:23 |
FEMALES FOR HIRE |
This from Jajjajjaj: Bwahahahaha. Do you think that your writing is so good that it is impossible for someone to not like it. Let me answer that question for you: of course you do, just look at your signature and bio. I already know that this mindless waste of a message was sent questioning why I voted down your story. The answer comes in the form of me calling you a douche bag. Not allowing anonymous votes is unhealthy for this site. What did my vote take your story down to; 85%, 87% maybe? The funny thing is, you probably don't think that your story doesn't that rating. It might not to be honest, but that is the rating it now has. You should probably start questioning yourself at this point. Is it worth not allowing anonymous votes knowing that one person can make such a big difference? If you had allowed anonymous votes, would your story have stayed on the top list for as long as it did? I let you go for what; two weeks? I honestly didn't even check the date. Something had to be do |
| 2011-07-12 19:44:14 |
Fixers |
Good story here. Poor guys didn't know what jumped them! |
| 2011-07-11 23:42:56 |
An Ebony Wife's first step to sluthood |
Wow! A very hot and sexy story! |
| 2011-07-05 10:37:15 |
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A nice story in a sea of stories that are not always as nice. |
| 2011-07-03 23:00:37 |
Turn Out The Lights |
Supurb storytelling with a lot of the unexpected tossed in. Really enjoyed this creative entry. - ELP |
| 2011-07-03 00:54:58 |
Alice and Trixie Turn A Trick: A Horny Honeymooners Story |
Loved this! It was like the "lost episode" or the one CBS couldn't broadcast. I almost felt embarrassed because I know Ralph and Alice and Trixie and Norton so well. You stayed true to the characters and I could see the whole thing but in black and white. Very well done! - ELP |
| 2011-07-01 19:35:18 |
Sarah's Story |
Such a very good story. Loved this one! |
| 2011-06-27 15:51:22 |
Penny, May I Rescue you from Hell? |
A very good story. Sex and violence always go together well. Reminded me of Mickey Spillane and Mike Hammer stories. This story was very well done and had a nice style to it. |
| 2011-06-27 15:42:40 |
Penny, May I Rescue you from Hell? |
A very good story. Sex and violence always go together well. Reminded me of Mickey Spillane and Mike Hammer stories. This story was very well done and had a nice style to it. |
| 2011-06-26 13:33:14 |
Playing With Fire - CAW 7 |
A well constructed story that fits the essence of the challenge even though not about hookers, whores, call-girls or escorts. You took the challenge in another direction but still a good one. |
| 2011-06-21 12:08:58 |
The King in Yellow. |
It was a STORY and a damn good one. The author latched onto a bit of truth and made it something far better. I would have hoped that there was a real story behind this. I would have loved it if people had googled Hindenburg and found out that the people I wrote about were all real... but nobody did. |
| 2011-06-20 21:36:07 |
The King in Yellow. |
Very, VERY good and haunting story. My front-runner, for now, for the win. - ELP |
| 2011-06-20 21:15:13 |
The King in Yellow. |
Very, VERY good and haunting story. My front-runner, for now, for the win. - ELP |
| 2011-06-20 17:45:49 |
Leaving Home: The Story of Candy Lane - CAW7 |
Very pornographic story. - ELP |
| 2011-05-31 14:39:45 |
Still Life. |
This story was very well written and had a great plot. I really enjoyed reading it and it sure held my attention.
ELP |
| 2011-05-29 09:46:35 |
Free Spirited (09)...My first job (New Years Day 1999) |
Love all the stories you write. Very hot! |
| 2011-05-29 01:09:51 |
2010-Mysterious Rendevouz |
Fantastic, really HOT story! I think that it was great. Who would have thought of getting pussy in a mens room?
ELP |
| 2011-05-29 00:50:55 |
Bosses New Toy - July 2010 |
I gave this a positive vote because it was very good... and HOT!
ELP |
| 2011-05-29 00:48:30 |
Free Spirited (10)...Job Training (New Years Day 1999) |
All your stories are written well. This one is great. |
| 2011-05-27 14:10:37 |
William and Ann Chapter 1 |
I really enjoyed it. William has to have some fun and Ann IS there... |
| 2011-05-15 09:59:07 |
In the Name of Love |
It was different. Not a bad story at all. |
| 2011-05-15 09:56:28 |
Brandon's Secret Lover |
A good entry. A teenage boy needs someone to look up. I meant look up to. |
| 2011-05-15 09:25:19 |
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Very good with a twist. |
| 2011-05-14 13:57:01 |
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Very good as told from both points of view. |
| 2011-05-14 12:05:22 |
Forbidden Dream |
Very good. I liked the diary style. |
| 2011-05-12 12:52:38 |
Becky And Her English Teacher |
Very good and more realistic than most of the stories on here. Thumbs up from me. |
| 2011-05-07 23:06:28 |
In the Flesch |
Good story. You are very discriptive in your writing. I liked it. |
| 2011-05-04 13:51:51 |
Dreams Without Guilt or Shame: the CHALLENGE |
Mixed themes and not really in female first-person but it was good in its own way. |
| 2011-04-29 14:30:54 |
Wet Dreams; Bitchy Behavior; Lust & Love |
Very good and lustful! Milk. It does a body good. |
| 2011-04-19 23:01:52 |
JFK: My Lover, My President |
A very good story with a twist at the ending. |
| 2011-04-18 22:03:23 |
Love forever... |
Very good one. I didn't see that coming. |
| 2011-03-31 13:52:25 |
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Very good! It had me hot. |
| 2010-09-17 17:22:47 |
End Of Innocence |
Fantastic story. They should make a MOVIE of it! Sean Penn and Ellen Page in the leads? -ELP |
| 2010-08-12 21:51:48 |
Harry Potter And The Asses Of Fire |
Very funny stuff! I loved it! |
| 2010-08-12 21:50:52 |
A series of co-incidences part 4 |
Just utterly fantastic! I just love these two people and wish them every happiness. I hope they live happily together and have some lovely children. |
| 2010-08-05 21:20:45 |
The Red Fang Ch 3 Pt 1 |
Another very well written chapter in the saga. I am so glad that I found it here. I wasn't expecting it. A superior piece of writing!
-Emerson laken-Palmer |
| 2010-08-05 15:38:14 |
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Great, hot story! Told from the girl's point of view. Very good!
-Emerson Laken-Palmer |
| 2010-08-05 15:12:03 |
Contest entry: Bonds of youth |
I know I commented on this story when it first became validated. I was sure that I had voted on it but don't see my name. I made sure I gave it my "positive" today.
-Emerson Laken-Palmer |
| 2010-08-05 11:29:27 |
Vampire Seduction 1 |
Loved it as much as I love ALL of your fantastic stories.
ELP |
| 2010-08-05 08:10:12 |
Swimming Lessons |
Fantastic story. Very descriptive and very HOT. One of the better writers around.
-Emerson Laken-Palmer |
| 2010-08-02 15:06:24 |
History With Miss Martin |
Another really good story! You are a fantastic writer!
-- Emerson Laken-Palmer |
| 2010-08-01 10:45:44 |
Emily's Lesson |
Very good story. A new take on an old theme. I enjoyed it a whole lot!
-Emerson Laken-Palmer |
| 2010-07-31 00:04:15 |
THe Plane Crash Pt. 15 |
Great chapter to a great continuing story. |
| 2010-07-29 18:47:51 |
Vacation For Two - Thursday |
smoeone tlel iqqam taht I lvoed tihs sotry!
-ELP |
| 2010-07-29 18:40:20 |
How I spent my summer vaction |
Wonderful story and a fantastic piece of writing. I don't know if I commented before (can't find it) but I loved it AND Charlie. I hope he gets with her in the next chapter.
- Emerson Laken-Palmer
AKA Emerson Laken-Palmer |
| 2010-07-29 14:28:30 |
An incest birthday chapter 8 |
A fantastic story from a very good writer! I read this on the forum and now here again. Love the twins!
-Emerson Laken-Palmer |
| 2010-07-25 22:48:49 |
NIGHTS IN WHITE SATIN |
What a terrific story! I just loved it. Very unique and unexpected. One of the very best I've seen in the writers challenge. I hope Chris and the old man stay happy and together. - Emerson Laken-Palmer |
| 2010-07-25 21:45:53 |
Bonds of youth |
This story posted twice. Anyway, I liked the other one and gave this one a positive too. |
| 2010-07-25 10:50:07 |
Shattered Dreams |
She had it cumming, right? |
| 2010-07-24 20:35:42 |
Emily Goes To Vegas |
This was a very good and very hot story. I liked it and I'm glad to see that ass liker liked it too! - ELP |
| 2010-07-23 19:13:32 |
Sophie's Summer Holiday |
Very good story Jayney, just as I expected it would be! Loved Sophie. Great finish too. |
| 2010-07-23 18:14:43 |
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Another fantastic story from a very good writer. |
| 2010-07-19 23:01:05 |
I guess I really DID need a vacation! |
Very nice that the two of them, screwed by their mates, got to screw in the end. Very good writing! |
| 2010-07-18 23:02:00 |
Vacation For Two - Wednesday |
Nothing like a good, tasty meal... and she was. |
| 2010-07-18 22:51:58 |
Vacation For Two - Monday |
Getting VERY hot in that cabin now! |
| 2010-07-18 22:25:27 |
Vacation For Two - Sunday |
Softenening tensions? Liked this installment. She's good to cuddle. |
| 2010-07-18 20:38:48 |
A series of co-incidences, part 2 |
I hope you post both of these stories on the forum. Love them. I hope they live as man and wife and have beautiful children. That hasn't been written about, has it? |
| 2010-07-18 20:11:02 |
The Red Fang Ch 2 Pt 2 |
Everybody needs a meal now and again. You can't blame him and she was more than willing. Some sex you can sink your teeth into! |
| 2010-07-18 20:09:08 |
The Red Fang Ch 2 Pt 1 |
Fantastic! I read this on the forum and loved it! |
| 2010-07-18 17:01:20 |
Second Honeymoon |
What could go wrong? Everything, I guess. |
| 2010-07-18 16:54:21 |
a summer conquest |
This was a very good and very well told story. That girl didn't know WHAT she wanted and it was her decision. Screw her! (Well, I guess you did!) |
| 2010-07-18 16:25:25 |
Teacher's Summer Vacation |
He got more than he wanted. |
| 2010-07-18 12:32:46 |
Summer Tease |
She started off as an innocent tease but, in the end, he turned her into a slut? Is that the kind of girl he wanted? |
| 2010-07-17 20:57:00 |
If Only. |
Very scary. It happens all the time when you read the headlines. |
| 2010-07-17 20:29:07 |
Hotel Clerk |
Enjoyed this story very much as I do ALL your stories! |
| 2010-07-16 22:55:01 |
A series of co-incedents |
Fantastic story... wonderful sister! |
| 2010-07-16 09:46:46 |
Sicilian Adventure |
Excellent, elegant and well crafted story. The writing and the style is impeccable. |
| 2010-07-15 21:32:17 |
How I spent my summer vaction |
Story about a very lucky kid indeed. What a great aunt! A boy needs more than just a helping "hand" these days! |
| 2010-07-15 00:22:46 |
Sisterly love |
Good story. Jack was no dull brother! |
| 2010-07-04 10:13:51 |
Temptation |
Great writing! I want him to stay with his girlfriend though. I love her too. |
| 2010-07-03 08:49:42 |
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More of the same. In a good way. |
| 2010-06-21 22:24:56 |
The Vertical Smile - part 2 |
Very good. Keep on writing stories like this. Maybe a happy event in their future? |
| 2010-06-21 22:19:28 |
Her Vertical Smile |
Very good story told well. I'm smiling too... in surprise. |
| 2010-06-14 00:27:14 |
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Lots of hot sex for Alexis, I would love to read any story that you write! |
| 2010-06-13 10:26:42 |
Harry Potter getting in to her pants |
Does J. K. Rowling know about this? |
| 2010-06-09 14:15:11 |
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This would take playing with Barbies to a whole new (unheard of) level! Another good, very creative story. |
| 2010-06-09 13:06:05 |
First Time |
Loved this story on the forum and love it here too. It is a super little story. |
| 2010-06-09 11:29:18 |
Just For Fun |
There are many viewpoints in politics. In this case it's from under the desk! Very good and very creative story from any point of view. |
| 2010-06-08 07:53:34 |
Proxy Stories #2 - Milk Maid |
Another very good (and very hot) story. So very creative in its plot. Better than average writer. |
| 2010-06-08 07:51:09 |
Proxy Tales #1 - Margaret |
Very hot story. Very creative. |
| 2010-05-16 21:10:31 |
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This is just a fantastic and very creative story! I give it five stars *****. I think the ending is the best part and the set up, at the beginning, leads you right into it but doesn't give it away. This is a great little writer and her stories just keep getting better... and hotter! |
| 2010-05-14 18:24:30 |
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Fantastic story! I loved it. It had a real ring of truth to it and a wonderful sense of innocence, to it, as if it had been from the mind of the 11-year-old who told it. I believe the story and the passion and the pain and rejection of the girl. This was some great writing! |
| 2010-04-25 14:15:52 |
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I think it was a great story and a very good, creative plot idea. |
| 2010-04-25 08:34:00 |
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As a fantasy story this is a good fantasy. There is more brewing here than is seen on the surface. |
| 2010-03-26 14:11:29 |
the perfect little sister |
Very good story. |