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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-02-19 02:26:09 |
Kitchen Fun |
My reaction was that I would have liked to punch mommy in the face. |
| 2012-02-19 01:43:29 |
Chapter 02 - My Step Sister Cindy |
The thing that made this story so erotic was your statement that it was real. Real people were really getting turned on. Definitely a turn on. |
| 2011-04-10 21:18:45 |
Sarah, My Best Friend - Chapter 1 |
Keep writing. The story would have been more real for me if Sarah had come round to Matt more slowly. |
| 2011-03-20 23:21:42 |
the party |
Waitaminnit! You started this story with a girl who refers to herself as "I". Then a guy sits on the bed with her and suddenly this story turns third person. You talk about "her" or "she". What happened to "I" or "me"? |
| 2011-03-11 00:31:41 |
Last Chance....Chapter 4 |
I like it. It is a story. It is the kind of story that could be on a short story website. This is not porn. This is as much a love story as a sex story. I like the characters. I like the counselor. Thanks for telling a story instead of giving me a graphic description of the feelings of a penis as it slides into a vagina which is dripping with wetness. Plenty of that on this website. |
| 2011-03-04 02:47:09 |
Last Chance....Chapter 2 |
It's okay with me. It is nice not to have sex and aggression against women thrown at me in a story. |
| 2011-02-26 01:51:46 |
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My ex-brother-in-law used to be recruited by his mother every time she had a new child, to empty out her breasts, which he did often while she got late in the pregnancy, but they never fucked. He liked it. |
| 2011-02-20 20:27:36 |
My Daughter Cindy Part # 4 |
It's okay if you learn that your means it is not mine and you're means you are, and that's what you were trying to say several times when you wrote "your". |
| 2011-02-20 20:15:18 |
My life Pt 1 |
Learn English. It will help you write better. Better than learn english itll help you write better. |
| 2011-02-16 03:52:36 |
The Saga of Hank Stenson |
If it were legal for me to do so, I would kill him. |
| 2011-02-04 21:49:02 |
My new life part 3 |
It has literary merit. A brutal story of depravity. |
| 2011-02-04 21:48:21 |
My new life part 3 |
It has literary merit. A brutal story of depravity. |
| 2011-01-28 18:19:19 |
Barb-a-que2 |
Me, I'd first smash his skull with a hammer. Then, I'd use the same hammer to break his jaw. I'd get out some lawn shears to cut his prick and balls off. Then I would use the hammer to bust every in his fingers in both hands. I guess that tells you I don't dig men manhandling women, but that's just me. |
| 2011-01-28 18:17:34 |
Barb-a-que2 |
Me, I'd first smash his skull with a hammer. Then, I'd use the same hammer to break his jaw. I'd get out some lawn shears to cut his prick and balls off. Then I would use the hammer to bust every in his fingers in both hands. I guess that tells you I don't dig men manhandling women, but that's just me. |
| 2011-01-07 20:58:06 |
Alex's Unusual Story |
Good story. All the elements of surprise. Well done. Face it, you are a writer. So write some more. |
| 2010-12-07 02:38:51 |
Blackmailing servant part 1 |
Sorry but I think that forcing a woman to do something she clearly does not want to do just because you are horny is disgusting. Find someone who wants you. |