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| 2013-02-11 08:05:19 |
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I read all these stories in one night. It is now 5am on a Monday. DAMN YOU! I will forgive you if you keep the up the quality. I would rather wait for a well done job than a rushed one. |
| 2013-02-11 06:42:46 |
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Thank you for the time and effort you so laboriously devote to writing these fantastically enrapturing tales of myth. |
| 2013-02-11 05:17:00 |
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Woot. Okay... I should have gone to sleep 5 hours ago :| but I don't know if I can stop. I think I've expended all my "extra energy" so I'm just reading for the plot now. I may need to revisit many chapters to fully "enjoy" some sexions. |
| 2013-02-11 04:31:16 |
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I completely enjoyed reading this chapter. Going on to #7 now woot. |
| 2013-02-11 03:40:15 |
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What this kid said below me. I too have stayed up way past my intended sleeping time. Your story is absolutely captivating. I can only hope that you haven't stopped writing, that you are still currently in the process of writing more. I would seriously dig it if this became some sort of sci-fi series or something. |
| 2013-02-11 02:35:00 |
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Awesome, another great chapter. Thank you for posting here. Reading ch 5 next :) |
| 2013-02-11 00:58:52 |
Returning Chapter 02 |
I think these stories are awesome. I thoroughly enjoy your writing style and plot line. 95/100 for me, -5 because of spelling errors but I mean come on, who cares about spelling when what you write is good enough to make up for it? |
| 2012-10-22 02:26:34 |
Taken by wolves |
Would have been more interesting if they had eaten her afterwards. |
| 2012-01-09 03:24:11 |
Owning a Dominant Bitch - Complete |
I have read this whole story, and am thoroughly satisfied. 10/10 stars for complete greatness/skill. Sharing this story with ppls :) |
| 2011-12-05 23:55:13 |
Alien Inheritance 5 |
I've visited the website from MCSTORIES.com and both are identical except for the title and author. Starting to look like SeanJay bit this story from someone else. No links back to the original work or anything makes me highly suspicious these submissions are plagiarized. It's all good if the submitter wants to spread knowledge of a good series by posting links and accrediting the author, but to pass it off as their own? That's pretty lame. |
| 2011-12-03 07:38:16 |
Alien Inheritance 4 |
Nice teaser/segue. But this is torture! Please take your time. Create chapters that take a few minutes to finish. Leave status updates on your most recently released chapter letting us know the next part is still being worked on, etc. I understand that as a writer, it takes time to put something you feel is worth publishing. Don't rush it, feel it out. Please continue the story, because I'm hooked now. :) thanks. |
| 2011-09-09 03:12:42 |
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Oh yeah, also forgot to mention: as a fan of your work, I also feel that this story-line would benefit from the exclusion of pregnancy. Pls and Ty. |
| 2011-09-09 03:08:19 |
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Great job with creating the story. You really know how to add substance to this genre. That said, there are a few things I would like you to work on: it's okay to describe an event in past tense, but not with sex scenes. The first sex session you went into really felt like someone was telling me their story from last night. I don't want to read a story telling me about a story (especially when about sex). You want your readers to really be absorbed into your work, so make it current, flowing, and exciting (the latter you've done very well with). Also, the other thing I want you to work on is revising your story. It's not just about spell-checking. There are some spots where you've left out whole words, this can easily be remedied by rereading what you've written a few times. As for spell-checking, openoffice (software, just google it) is a great free word processor that is similar to Microsoft Word. Did I mention it's free? lol. |
| 2010-09-18 17:11:56 |
bodyguard |
godammit don't quit, you are a really good story maker. Not many people actually do get to read it, but i'll tell ya what, I'll send a link of this story to all my friends and try to get as many people to read it appreciate it like i do. |
| 2010-09-05 08:13:13 |
If only I could travel back in time |
lame. keep working at writing though. |