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| 2012-11-04 12:59:01 |
Helena's Nightmare |
To the Anonymous reader: I didn't really think of it as a rape story either, but it had been described as such by some people who had read it.
Therefore I tagged it as rape so that anyone who wished to avoid 'rape' stories could do so.
Sorry if that disappointed you, and led you to give it a negative vote. |
| 2012-11-04 10:29:45 |
The Assassins Gambit: she who has the amethyst eyes |
Lengthy and complex, so therefore an even greater achievement. Bravo, well written.
JR x |
| 2012-10-24 14:40:42 |
Angela |
Scary stuff!
Very clever story, and made me shudder with the graphic detail in places, which is a compliment to your writing. A positive from me. |
| 2012-07-15 08:24:13 |
The Librarian and the Bartender |
Great story, well written. |
| 2012-03-12 17:22:43 |
Best Little Whorehouse on XNXX: Virgins In The Whorehouse! |
That was a superb story, mixing characters from the Story Forum of XnXX with a wonderfully hilarious storyline into some very stimulating sex scenes.
Top job! |
| 2012-03-02 14:37:49 |
The Shape Of Things To Cum...? |
For some reason there appears to be a formatting issue, with all those random Ԉ things appearing out of nowhere. |
| 2012-03-01 15:27:56 |
The Girl Of His Best Friend |
Guys!
Guys, guys, guys - I know it's an old joke!
It was just meant to be a bit of light-hearted fun.
'k? |
| 2012-02-21 10:08:16 |
Thr Protege |
That was good, very well written indeed.
It would be easier to read if there were double line breaks in the text, it does become a bit 'wall of text' at times, but nevertheless very, very good. |
| 2011-05-29 09:54:29 |
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I'm a bit of a fan of yours anyway, PP, but this is one of your best.
Nice story! |
| 2011-05-29 09:51:44 |
Anna's Story Repost |
Yet another author I have discovered in the course of this competition!
Good work, I enjoyed that. |
| 2011-05-29 09:40:52 |
Forbidden Dream |
Great stuff!
Loved it, well done. |
| 2011-05-29 09:38:32 |
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I think that was a superb bit of writing!
Well done, Hardrive, I loved that story - heartachingly sad in the middle, but you managed a happy ending - well done!
I look forward to reading more of your stuff in the future. |
| 2011-05-29 09:28:43 |
Still Life. |
That was.....bloody fantastic!
You are another author that I hadn't read before, but I will catch up on some of your other stuff sometime.
Well done! |
| 2011-05-29 09:20:04 |
Becky And Her English Teacher |
Good writing!
I don't think I'd read any of your stuff before, but I definate;y will in future. |
| 2011-05-27 17:38:57 |
Rough Justice |
To the reader who said "you cannot fuck underwater"
OH YES YOU CAN!
lol
The part of this story in the hot-tub that I describe was simply a re-telling of an incident I once did.
It was with my (at the time) own husband, not the husband of my next-door neighbour, but believe me, all the action I described in the hot-tub is very possible! :-) |
| 2011-05-17 18:18:34 |
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Superb twist at the end, brilliant! |
| 2011-05-08 06:36:08 |
Mistress Hazel |
Absolutely superb writing (as ever) Cija, and I fail to see how anyone could not be drawn into the world you created there.
The sexual tension was palpable.
Great stuff! |
| 2011-01-30 08:37:25 |
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OMG!
What a fantastic story; intriguing build-up, and some amazingly descriptive hot stuff.
Brilliant, bloody brilliant. |
| 2010-12-14 13:01:14 |
Through the looking glass |
Loved it!
Highly amusing and very cleverly thought out, jolly well done. |
| 2010-12-02 14:47:19 |
Thumbelina |
Very amusing!
Nice little tale. |
| 2010-12-02 14:47:02 |
Thumbelina |
Very amusing!
Nice little tale. |
| 2010-12-02 14:36:20 |
Pussies and Boots: A Piece of Fairy Tail |
Great stuff as ever, Jack.
Made me smile, thank you! |
| 2010-11-24 14:33:07 |
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A grim tale indeed. Not to my personal taste, but there those who will like it, and for that reason it gets a positive from me. |
| 2010-11-24 14:32:20 |
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A grim tale indeed. Not to my personal taste, but there those who will like it, and for that reason it gets a positive from me. |
| 2010-11-24 14:31:14 |
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A grim tale indeed. Not to my personal taste, but there are those who will enjoy it, so for that reason it gets a positive vote from me. |
| 2010-11-24 14:28:53 |
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A grim tale indeed. Not to my personal taste, but there are those who will enjoy it, so for that reason it gets a positive vote from me. |
| 2010-11-24 14:27:09 |
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A grim tale indeed. Not to my personal taste, but there are those who will enjoy it, so this gets a positive vote from me for that reason. |
| 2010-11-24 14:26:47 |
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A grim tale indeed. Not to my personal taste, but there are those who will enjoy it, so this gets a positive vote from me for that reason. |
| 2010-11-24 14:26:33 |
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A grim tale indeed. Not to my personal taste, but there are those who will enjoy it, so this gets a positive vote from me for that reason. |
| 2010-11-14 11:56:39 |
How much can you get in? |
LOL! :-)
Loved it, thanks Wims x |
| 2010-09-28 04:18:35 |
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WOW! That was amazing, as Sahara said, its total anonymity, even gender is optional. Brilliant writing. Superb x |
| 2010-09-28 04:18:08 |
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WOW! That was amazing, as Sahara said, its total anonymity, even gender is optional. Brilliant writing. Superb x |
| 2010-08-26 17:39:50 |
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That was great!
I loved it. Sweet story, I do love a happy ending x |
| 2010-08-23 16:50:14 |
Dianne's problem |
Oh bugger! The webpage keeps telling me my comment is too short - all I was trying to say was "Hahahahaha"
is that good enough, Mr Webpage? :-) |
| 2010-08-23 16:48:38 |
Dianne's problem |
Ha ha ha ha good one! |
| 2010-08-23 16:38:34 |
Win free sex |
I hadnt heard it - and I laughed :-) |
| 2010-08-22 17:05:01 |
Dennis and Sarah |
Ooooh! I liked that. Its made me feel just a bit...er...I have to go now ;-) |
| 2010-08-18 17:43:32 |
Me and my Rampant Rabbit |
Great stuff!
I love my Rabbit, if it could fix things around the house, take me out for a meal and a drink on a Saturday night and maybe bring me home a box of chocolates occasionally I think I'd marry it. |
| 2010-08-11 13:55:51 |
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I thought that was a really good story, too.
JR x |
| 2010-08-08 17:35:31 |
Let me bite your tits |
Well, it made me laugh...
:-)
JR x |
| 2010-08-08 15:14:32 |
Did you want a slave? |
I thought it was a good story, and I followed it without any difficulty. Sometimes it's a refreshing change to read a story in the first person.
You need to proof-read more, Ceardan, there were several errors in punctuation (sentences not beginning with capitals, quotation marks missing etc) but if this is, as you say in your introduction, your first story it is a very good attempt.
And I came here intending to be critical, following your negative vote on one of my stories, but your writing deserves the positive rating I have given it. |
| 2010-08-08 14:13:55 |
Lock up your women folk. |
Wimmers!
Some folk obviously have no sense of humour!
That's the best laugh I've had in ages, I'm grinning like the Cheshire Cat at the mo!
'Cause I'm a dumbo I voted while I wasn't logged in, so my vote will only count as 1, not 4, sorry.
JR x |
| 2010-08-08 11:10:43 |
Whole lotta Rosie |
I enjoyed that, nice story!
JR x |
| 2010-08-04 19:06:57 |
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WOW!
Good story, hot sex and even a mention of the perineal raphe!
I'm impressed.
So impressed that i'm going to have a good look at a 'perineal raphe' next time I get the opportunity.
Brilliant, nice work Smc!
JR x |
| 2010-08-04 17:52:39 |
Friends Confessions. |
Well, it made me titter!
LOL Wims lad ;-) |
| 2010-08-01 13:23:40 |
Vacation For Two - Friday |
That was an interesting (and unexpected) ending.
Great story, well written, I enjoyed reading it.
JR x |
| 2010-08-01 09:37:49 |
Biker Vets Lose a Righteous Brother |
That was a great story.
JR x
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| 2010-08-01 07:41:28 |
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Brilliant!
Loved it, I want to hear more; did yo...er...Effie, see him again? |
| 2010-08-01 07:34:54 |
Johns Last Summer |
I enjoyed that, good story! |
| 2010-08-01 07:25:32 |
If Only. |
Dark and horrible - but it's supposed to be, isn't it?
Excellent story, jolly well done Wims lad ;-) |
| 2010-08-01 07:05:26 |
A Good Kind Of Trouble |
I enjoyed that!
Lovely story.
JR x |
| 2010-08-01 06:53:12 |
Sweet Little Lucy Likes My Wheelchair |
Really well written!
-JR x |
| 2010-08-01 04:16:21 |
Sicilian Adventure |
Superb. Absolutely superb.
That's about all I can think of to say, a wonderful romance with some brilliantly described passionate sex at the end.
Fantastic! |
| 2010-07-30 18:21:58 |
Emily Goes To Vegas |
Oooh! Hot! HOT HOT HOT! x |
| 2010-07-28 20:02:59 |
Contest entry: Bonds of youth |
What a good story - is that really your first one?
Well done MrF! |
| 2010-07-20 15:05:58 |
I guess I really DID need a vacation! |
Ohhh my!
I have to go and be alone for a while now.... |
| 2010-07-18 12:54:14 |
How I spent my summer vaction |
Oooh I liked that! Yes please, more! |
| 2010-07-18 11:32:39 |
SUMMER'S END |
Good story!
Loved the reference to 'English Breakast', one of my favourites, made me smile.
As it's you, I should've known that it wouldn't have a happy ending, though! |
| 2010-06-17 18:13:13 |
My Life - sister swapping! |
Well...I read it all the way to the end.
And I enjoyed it!
Thank you A1664 |
| 2010-06-09 07:34:34 |
First Time |
I enjoyed that, what a super little story. |
| 2010-06-07 14:43:28 |
Girl with no name at a music festival |
I enjoyed it, hope there's more! |
| 2010-06-04 15:09:31 |
Living The Dream. |
Gosh, what a good story!
Loved the happy ending, I really enjoyed that whole tale. |
| 2010-05-25 06:19:57 |
Kate |
What a beautiful story!
I loved it, thank you. |
| 2010-05-25 05:56:02 |
VAGINAFEST - Chapter 1 |
OMG!
Wow!
That's HOT!
I have to go and ..er...be alone for a minute or two now ;-) |
| 2010-05-19 13:41:04 |
Angelinas Seduction and Brads Naked Surrender |
That was brilliant! Loved it :-) |
| 2010-05-16 19:28:30 |
Seventeen |
Oooh, that was great! |
| 2010-05-16 07:59:34 |
What's love without stupidity |
That's another story I really enjoyed reading, thank you! |
| 2010-05-16 07:43:28 |
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It's a short story.
I enjoyed reading it.
Nuff said. |
| 2010-05-09 08:18:35 |
Aftermath |
Interesting idea, I liked that! |
| 2010-05-09 08:10:33 |
Homecoming |
Really enjoyed reading that! Thank you x |
| 2010-04-28 19:09:11 |
Role Confusion |
Hot! Strange, but hot!
I enjoyed reading it. |
| 2010-04-28 15:05:51 |
Solitude Interrupted |
As a bit of a Trekkie - I loved that! |
| 2010-04-28 14:41:07 |
Now it's my turn |
Loved that twist at the end! Great stuff, enjoyed that. |
| 2010-04-28 14:35:40 |
On a Moonlit Night, Wishes May Come True |
Wow!
Fantastic story, loved it. |
| 2010-04-18 19:32:26 |
Nora - The Third and Final Chapter |
What a wonderful story! Amazing, thank you. |
| 2010-04-07 19:53:54 |
Ellen Teaches Young Tech Boy a Lesson |
I loved this story when I read it on the forum, and I still love it now.
Part 2 sometime? Please? |
| 2010-04-07 14:53:40 |
Karen |
Wonderful! Simply wonderful. |
| 2010-04-07 14:40:18 |
The Casting Couch |
I really enjoyed that.Very good! |
| 2010-04-05 14:55:08 |
The Unauthorized Sex Story of Jack Schitt |
Reading that has left me with a great big smile across my face :-) |
| 2010-03-30 10:13:09 |
Backyard Princess, Chapter 5 |
What a terrific story. I've really enjoyed reading that, thank you! |