Comments from Eric the Red
|2012-05-28 19:11:19||Wake up baby girl: Part three||"Any young girls 9-13 give me ur number or email"
"any young girls want to sext or trade pic's my number is 1(503)801-0962"
If you want to pick up girls, especially under age girls, write your own stories.
|2012-07-08 18:31:39||Daddy's Sleepy Time Surprise||First, and foremost, I fucking love daddy/daughter role play, really all little girl/older man role play rocks, but most especially daddy/daughter.
As to the story, I would integrate the POVs into a third person narrative, and not mention that it's role play as that takes the reader out of the fantasy.
The little note at the top stating that it was inspired by a role play scenario covers it.
Keep writing. =Dg
|2012-10-14 06:39:28||Wake up baby girl: Part four||He slipped his hand down her back to squeeze her tight little butt, and he noticed her panties were damp toward the crotch so he slid his hand down the crack of her ass, and was almost shocked to find that her pussy had become so juicy while sucking his cock that the crotch of her panties was soaked through.
That's the full paragraph, and it does start right where the other left off.
|2012-12-20 05:19:14||Amber's new teacher||"Someone's seen The Sure Thing."
Yes, I totally adapted the classroom scene from The Sure Thing.
You're pretty sharp, and I am well impressed.