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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-12-20 05:19:14 |
Amber's new teacher |
"Someone's seen The Sure Thing."
Yes, I totally adapted the classroom scene from The Sure Thing.
You're pretty sharp, and I am well impressed. |
| 2012-10-14 06:39:28 |
Wake up baby girl: Part four |
He slipped his hand down her back to squeeze her tight little butt, and he noticed her panties were damp toward the crotch so he slid his hand down the crack of her ass, and was almost shocked to find that her pussy had become so juicy while sucking his cock that the crotch of her panties was soaked through.
That's the full paragraph, and it does start right where the other left off. |
| 2012-07-08 18:31:39 |
Daddy's Sleepy Time Surprise |
First, and foremost, I fucking love daddy/daughter role play, really all little girl/older man role play rocks, but most especially daddy/daughter.
As to the story, I would integrate the POVs into a third person narrative, and not mention that it's role play as that takes the reader out of the fantasy.
The little note at the top stating that it was inspired by a role play scenario covers it.
Keep writing. =Dg |
| 2012-05-28 19:11:19 |
Wake up baby girl: Part three |
"Any young girls 9-13 give me ur number or email"
"any young girls want to sext or trade pic's my number is 1(503)801-0962"
WTF?!
If you want to pick up girls, especially under age girls, write your own stories. |
| 2012-05-03 01:24:55 |
Spanking Amber |
"my 7yo step daughter just came in sat on my lap and ask what i was reading. OMG!!"
Damn! That's just wrong, so, so, wrong. |
| 2011-05-26 14:20:57 |
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"Hey. Your intro doesn't make sense. If you were really Rebecca Lewis, a woman, why would you call yourself Eric and post your gender as male. Makes no since at all. Even your contact info is under a man's name. Just seems like a sorry attempt to make it look like you didn't steal somone elses work. You might as well post the remaining chapters all at once. Your not fooling anybody into thinking you are posting chapters as they are written. I'm just sayin...... "
(sigh) I never claimed that I was writing it as I go, but I am re-editing it as I go because the first time I posted it under my pen-name, you may have heard of those, it was full of mistakes.
I actually chose the name Rebeca because of the first story that I posted here, Beckys after school surprise, and I deliberately misspelled it as a clue that this was not my real name.
I KNOW that I wrote this so you can think what you want
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| 2011-05-25 10:59:32 |
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"Below, have you ever thought he may have a second name which he uses to write under? Have you checked his profile for instance? Have you ever heard the phrase "Look before you leap"?"
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WOW! Someone thar actually read the Rebeca Lewis profile, and knows that I am a man.
Thank you for that. :) |
| 2011-05-25 10:55:19 |
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"This was posted in 2009 by Rebecca Lewis."
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"Hey poser. This is not your story. This is plagiarism. This is series was written by a woman and it was taken off of this site already. This story is one of my favorites of all time so I'm not mad that it is reposted but you are dead wrong for trying to take credit as being the auther. I suggest you state that it is a repost from a different talented FEMALE auther on chapter 3. Again this is a really good story, too bad it's not you own. Poser "
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"does Rebeca Lewis know about this??"
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Yeeeaahh, ya see, the thing about that is, I AM Rebeca Lewis.
I started with that pen name, and if you'd bothered to read her/my profile I state quite clearly that I am a middle aged man. |
| 2011-05-21 10:46:44 |
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So tell me Ghostrider are you planing on reporting ALL the stories with this sort of theme in them, because there are still a lot of them on here, or just mine, and how did I earn this privledge?
This is the first of six parts actually, and although incest, and pedophillia are plot devices, that's not really what the story is about. |
| 2010-12-18 14:38:26 |
The ride |
Nice hot story.
You're such a good girl to tell sexy stories like that. |
| 2010-12-17 12:48:25 |
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The better question is how could you read it?
FREAK! |
| 2010-07-21 22:18:35 |
Vacation For Two - Monday |
44 votes, and still at 100%?
You may have some critical comments, but at least they aren't voting you into oblivion.
I envy you, I truly do. |
| 2010-07-16 02:36:15 |
How I spent my summer vaction |
WOW!
I'm really blown away by the response to this story, and it looks like I've got another series on my hands. lol.
Thank you all for your comments.
Your pleasure is my pleasure. ;) |
| 2010-06-25 16:54:06 |
My daughter's gang bang |
Freud called it "the Electra complex", and the idea was that since a girl's father is her first model for manhood, all women subconsciously want to fuck their dads.
Then, of course, there's the extremity of the taboo that makes it exciting, not to mention the idea that someone whom you know loves you unconditionally could also be your lover has an obvious appeal.
Of course these are very broad generalizations, and once you get down to individual psychology it gets even more complicated, but fortunately one doesn't need to know all this to find it hot.
Thanks for the comments.
It's nice to feel appreciated. :)
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| 2010-06-19 23:43:26 |
Surreal First Night |
Good concept, well written, but the end felt a little rushed.
If you are going to take the time, and care to set up a sex scene, take a little extra time on the actual sex.
:) |
| 2010-06-10 13:54:39 |
Just Me for the third time |
You are such a naughty little princess to end it on a cliff hanger like that, but on the other hand, I'v done worse to my readers, so I guess I deserve it. ;)
Can't wait to see what happens next. |
| 2010-05-28 21:32:35 |
Just me, second part |
I can't wait to read more.
Trust me, your posts are far from boring.
In point of fact they are quite exiting, and I look forward to the next installment with baited breath.
;) |
| 2010-05-15 18:52:35 |
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Great job, as usual.
I can't wait for your next story. ;) |
| 2010-03-21 19:27:21 |
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Yeah, I think it's just a story brittney, and although your concern is touching, I believe "u" is spelled you.
I mean, it's not a hard word. |