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| 2013-05-27 16:19:54 |
ANNABELL |
Reply to anonymous reader
2013-05-27 01:02:37
My story is clearly labelled: "Non-erotic fiction" so you shouldn't have been surprised that it had no erotic content and didn't espouse a medically accurate diagnosis for the child or her mother. Additionally I think you might find it interesting to know that this site has a "Non-erotic" category which hosts almost 500 stories. You might want to give some of them a try.. |
| 2013-02-11 09:26:02 |
ANNABELL |
Note from the author. Dear Reader, this story is labelled as Non-Erotic. I also warn in my introduction that you might find it disturbing so please don't vote down the story because it has no sexual content and has a sad ending. The intent of this story is to make you think and cause you to consider that much of the suffering in the world is self chosen and that there is no situation that is so bad that it can not be remedied by the power of forgiveness. Forgiveness allows us to put the bad behind us and move on. You may not agree but if this story made you think about that, it did its job. Hope you enjoyed it. |
| 2013-01-26 23:26:54 |
THE MOON STONE |
Replay to Anonymous reader 2013-01-26 10:34:49
Thank you for pointing out the "Daniel" spelling error but I made that correction about 6 months ago in chapters 2, 3 and 4.
You may be surprised to know that I was a professional photographer for many years so I know more about that subject than you think.. Gun stocks adopted for cameras is not my idea. They've been around for years and are mainly used by nature photographers. So you see, I'm not as ignorant and stupid as you seem to think.
And since you've been so generous with your advice, let me pass some on to you. Think twice before labeling people as "ignorant" and "stupid;" especially when discussing subjects you don't don't really understand. That can come back to bite you in the ass when the tables are turned on you. Thank you for giving my story a try. |
| 2013-01-13 10:34:29 |
THE MOON STONE (Part 4) |
I'd like to apologize to the fans of this story for having made them wait so long before I posted this story. It was finished in late December but I got sick and put it aside for several weeks. It also took a while to get it proof read. I'm going to try to post a new chapter every 30 days but I need your help. My proof reader didn't like the way I portrayed the syndicate. He thought it was too political and too preachy. My opinion is that the real battle that is going on in the world is the rich vs the poor, the powerful vs the weak, and political corruption vs democracy. In this story I've personified one group as the evil syndicate and the other as the Champion of the light who is fighting to expose the evil group and dismantle their manipulative organization. My question to the readers is... do you agree with my proof reader or me. Should I continue to develop my story in the direction it is going or should I describe a more traditional villain? Your opinion?. |
| 2013-01-04 14:45:56 |
THE MOON STONE, part 3 (THREE) |
I apologise to the fans of my Moon Stone story for the delay in publishing part 4. The fact is that it has been finished for almost 2 weeks. It just needs to be proofed. I've been ill for the last few weeks but I'm trying to get the proofing done. If I can't get it done in the next few days I'll post it as is and hope you will all forgive the errors. In the future I'll try to post a new chapter every month. Thanks for your patience. HD |
| 2012-11-25 09:42:45 |
THE MOON STONE, part 3 (THREE) |
Thank you one and all for your encouraging comments. With regard to going on with the story, It's not the muse that is lacking but the time. However I do feel a responsibility to the fans of this story and I will try and make the time and post the next chapter as soon as I can. Again, I thank you for your support and patience. |
| 2012-11-15 19:26:29 |
THE MOON STONE |
FOR: Anonymous reader 2012-11-15 18:14:23
What a question.... we hardly know each other... I'm an old fashion author so you'll have to take me out first. I expect flowers, dinner and a show. Then after the third date, maybe I'll let you get to second base... but if you want to play you'll have to bring your catchers mit cause I'm brining my bat and the balls. |
| 2012-11-03 03:02:10 |
THE MOON STONE, part 3 (THREE) |
Dear readers, thank you for reading my story. A writer writes for his audience and I will post another chapter on this site if the story gets enough readership and ratings to justify the effort. I have been told by some that this kind of story does not belong on a porn site. Others say they don't care if the story has no sex as long as it is an enjoyable and interesting read. We shall see. Thanks again for your interest in my stories.. |
| 2012-10-11 18:30:51 |
my story 2 |
After reading parts one and two I can say it's an interesting story but I think you need to write longer chapters. I'm looking forward to your next installment. And thank you for the message you left on my story. You might want to read part one of the Moon Stone, but read the version I posted on the forum. Go to the sex stories portion of the forum and find "The Moon Stone" parts one and two. If you like part one leave me a message. Thanks. |
| 2012-06-05 10:00:31 |
THE MOON STONE |
Thank you belizelarry. I rushed to publish this so I didn't have time to proof it and on top of that I accidental posted an earlier version that does not have all the latest tweaks and corrections. Never the less the story is still essential the same so you still got 99 percent of the final draft. Yes, I am thinking of adding to this story as Daniel is just staring her adventure. When I post the next part I'll send you a PM. Again, thanks for your comment and for taking the time to read. |
| 2011-07-11 15:19:35 |
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I tried using names of the people I know from xn in my story but I don't know every ones name and I only have 5 main characters. One of my characters does something I could have called "Ralphing" but that's not very flattering... Anyway, good story. I will award it a positive rating and the "Fickle Finger of Fate" award" . |
| 2011-07-09 02:07:16 |
TEENAGE GIRLS FOR SALE |
I worked on this story for almost two weeks so please let me know what you think of it. If you like it you can vote for it on the CAW7 contest thread in the "sex stories" section of the forum. Thanks |
| 2011-05-27 13:51:52 |
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Dear Readers: The stories I write are fantasies. Posting your real life experiences and confessing to crimes you have committed is very risky. There is no statutory limit on sex crimes against children.and what you do with them can put you at risk for the rest of your lives. I'd rather hear about how you liked the story and suggestions on what you think would make the story better.... Thanks for reading my stories and leaving a comment. |
| 2011-05-24 03:05:32 |
Memores In Ashes |
I just finished your story and I must say that I did enjoy it. You have a good writing style and you can tell a story... that's all you need.
After reading your sex scene, I felt sorry that I made mine so descriptive, but I thought it was a requirement of stories written for this site. Actually, your handling of the sex scene was in keeping with the elegance of the story, so it fit in perfectly.
I'd also like to mention that you did a good job researching the details of this historical piece and made it all seem very believable.
HD
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| 2011-05-17 13:31:45 |
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So many people have asked me if this story is true. The short answer is that it is based on actual events. The story had to be condensed to fit the short story format and some parts have been dramatised for readability. However, the overall story, including the fact that the couple had: an unfortunate break-up, a long unwanted separation and the circumstances of their eventual reunion, are all true. Thank you for your interest in this story. If you liked it, please vote in the CAW6 Contest you'll fine in the "Sex Stories" forum. |
| 2011-05-16 12:17:32 |
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I liked your story and gave it a positive vote because it touched me. I'm a straight guy but underneath the skin we are all human and share the same feelings. The one thing that bothered me about the story is that Holly came out of nowhere with fully developed feelings for Beth. Maybe there should be a passage where Holly explains how she became attracted to Beth. Not telling you how to write your stories... just making an observation. |
| 2011-05-14 00:31:15 |
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I hope you liked my story and that you'll leave me a helpful comment. You can also vote for this story in the "Sex Stories" Forum. Just Click on the "Calling All Writers 6" thread and look for my story in the list of stories. I recommend you read some of the other fine stories entered in this contest... Thank you. HD |
| 2011-05-11 18:08:17 |
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To the unknown gibberish writer: What you're doing is pathetic. Knocking my stories and voting them down will not make your stories any better. Spend your time trying to improve yourself instead of trying to diminish others. |
| 2011-05-02 16:05:40 |
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A very good beginning. Your writing style flows very well and you keep the readers interest. You've set the stage for what promises to be a very good read. |
| 2011-04-30 02:13:37 |
Wet Dreams; Bitchy Behavior; Lust & Love |
It must be difficult to put on your lipstick with your tongue shoved so deep into your cheek? This story goes to show that a good writer, when given lemons can still come up with a good tart. Thumbs up. |
| 2010-10-25 18:13:15 |
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Thanks for reading part 1. There are a total of 6 parts, all building on each other and each hotter than the previous. Part 1 is just the set-up for the other chapters. The last 2 chapters are called \"Uncle Time Returns.\" They were added because so many readers asked me to continue the story. Most of my readers say they enjoyed the series. Hope you enjoy it too. |
| 2010-10-25 18:12:27 |
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Thanks for reading part 1. There are a total of 6 parts, all building on each other and each hotter than the previous. Part 1 is just the set-up for the other chapters. The last 2 chapters are called \"Uncle Time Returns.\" They were added because so many readers asked me to continue the story. Most of my readers say they enjoyed the series. Hope you enjoy it too. |
| 2010-10-02 13:16:07 |
Daddy's Little Minx: Maria |
I know this is just a story but do girls that age really fantasize about having sex with their fathers? |
| 2010-09-21 04:23:47 |
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You have potential but I would like to see you develop the characters and turn this into a story and not just an event from a story. |
| 2010-08-17 23:54:57 |
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To the many readers that asked me to write a part 5 to the UNCLE TIM'S DILEMMA series, I hope you liked this addition. To those that are reading about Uncle Tim for the first time, if you liked his story and you want to know how and why Uncle Tim started fucking the girls, you might want to go to the top of this page and click on my name. That will take you to a list with links to all 4 parts of Uncle Tim's Dilemma. ENJOY. |
| 2010-08-16 13:26:54 |
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I'm posting part 5 today. It will be called "Uncle Tim Returns". UTD-5. It picks up where UTD-4 left off but the sequel got so long I had to cut it up into parts so there will also be an "Uncle Tim Returns" part 2, or UTD-6. I tried to do a good job so I hope my readers enjoy it and let me know what they think.. |
| 2010-08-01 05:52:49 |
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I've started writing part 5 and I'm more then half way finished. Thank you for waiting and all the words of encouragement, I won't disappoint you. |
| 2010-04-12 12:37:42 |
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This is a 4 part story that builds to an explosive end in part 4. If you just want to read the most sexy part go directly to part 4. For those of you that want to read the full story, I want you to know that about 60% of readers that read part 1 go on to part 2. Almost 80% of readers that get to part 2 go on to part 3, and more than 90% of those that read part 3 go on to part 4. Enjoy the read and please leave a comment to let me know what you think. |
| 2010-03-28 02:15:24 |
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You have to write another chapter because you left too many questions for this to be the end. Good story. |
| 2010-03-27 11:26:16 |
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I like that you made the story plausible. So many stories start with unlikely and unbelievable situations. They characterize the father as a born predator and the girl as a ready and willing whore. Creating a situation that can lead to sex is so much more believable. |
| 2010-03-23 11:30:08 |
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Is this the end for poor Uncle Tim? He'll be back in part 5 which I'm thinking of titling "Tim's Revenge." I have an outline for the story but I'm not going to write it unless readers say they want to see it. |
| 2010-03-23 11:19:37 |
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You've made it this far and your reward is at hand. Part 4 will give you lots of hot steamy sex with these two young girls. Please let me know if you have as much fun reading it as I had while writing. Oh, and don't worry about the end. There will be a part 5. What do you think I should call it? |
| 2010-03-23 11:07:22 |
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Glad you liked the story. You are about to be rewarded in part 3 with some really hot sexual foreplay and titillation. You're really going to like this.. |
| 2010-03-22 00:54:27 |
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To the reader: this is a 4 part story. It is designed to build your sexual interest and increase your level of arousal until the big climax at the end. If you read it all you will be entertained and satisfied but if all you want is something to get you off right away, just read part 4. Enjoy and give me feedback by leaving a comment. |
| 2010-03-21 21:52:51 |
Her Vertical Smile |
You get a thumbs up from me Don. This is a good start. I'd like to see what you do with a longer story. Hope to be reading it soon. |