Comments from Hardrive

Date Story title Comment
2013-01-13 10:34:29 THE MOON STONE (Part 4) I'd like to apologize to the fans of this story for having made them wait so long before I posted this story. It was finished in late December but I got sick and put it aside for several weeks. It also took a while to get it proof read. I'm going to try to post a new chapter every 30 days but I need your help. My proof reader didn't like the way I portrayed the syndicate. He thought it was too political and too preachy. My opinion is that the real battle that is going on in the world is the rich vs the poor, the powerful vs the weak, and political corruption vs democracy. In this story I've personified one group as the evil syndicate and the other as the Champion of the light who is fighting to expose the evil group and dismantle their manipulative organization. My question to the readers is... do you agree with my proof reader or me. Should I continue to develop my story in the direction it is going or should I describe a more traditional villain? Your opinion?.
2013-01-26 23:26:54 THE MOON STONE Replay to Anonymous reader 2013-01-26 10:34:49

Thank you for pointing out the "Daniel" spelling error but I made that correction about 6 months ago in chapters 2, 3 and 4.

You may be surprised to know that I was a professional photographer for many years so I know more about that subject than you think.. Gun stocks adopted for cameras is not my idea. They've been around for years and are mainly used by nature photographers. So you see, I'm not as ignorant and stupid as you seem to think.

And since you've been so generous with your advice, let me pass some on to you. Think twice before labeling people as "ignorant" and "stupid;" especially when discussing subjects you don't don't really understand. That can come back to bite you in the ass when the tables are turned on you. Thank you for giving my story a try.
2013-02-11 09:26:02 ANNABELL Note from the author. Dear Reader, this story is labelled as Non-Erotic. I also warn in my introduction that you might find it disturbing so please don't vote down the story because it has no sexual content and has a sad ending. The intent of this story is to make you think and cause you to consider that much of the suffering in the world is self chosen and that there is no situation that is so bad that it can not be remedied by the power of forgiveness. Forgiveness allows us to put the bad behind us and move on. You may not agree but if this story made you think about that, it did its job. Hope you enjoyed it.
2013-05-27 16:19:54 ANNABELL Reply to anonymous reader
2013-05-27 01:02:37

My story is clearly labelled: "Non-erotic fiction" so you shouldn't have been surprised that it had no erotic content and didn't espouse a medically accurate diagnosis for the child or her mother. Additionally I think you might find it interesting to know that this site has a "Non-erotic" category which hosts almost 500 stories. You might want to give some of them a try..