Comments from Hardrive

Date Story title Comment
2010-03-27 11:26:16 I like that you made the story plausible. So many stories start with unlikely and unbelievable situations. They characterize the father as a born predator and the girl as a ready and willing whore. Creating a situation that can lead to sex is so much more believable.
2010-03-28 02:15:24 You have to write another chapter because you left too many questions for this to be the end. Good story.
2010-04-12 12:37:42 This is a 4 part story that builds to an explosive end in part 4. If you just want to read the most sexy part go directly to part 4. For those of you that want to read the full story, I want you to know that about 60% of readers that read part 1 go on to part 2. Almost 80% of readers that get to part 2 go on to part 3, and more than 90% of those that read part 3 go on to part 4. Enjoy the read and please leave a comment to let me know what you think.
2010-08-01 05:52:49 I've started writing part 5 and I'm more then half way finished. Thank you for waiting and all the words of encouragement, I won't disappoint you.
2010-08-16 13:26:54 I'm posting part 5 today. It will be called "Uncle Tim Returns". UTD-5. It picks up where UTD-4 left off but the sequel got so long I had to cut it up into parts so there will also be an "Uncle Tim Returns" part 2, or UTD-6. I tried to do a good job so I hope my readers enjoy it and let me know what they think..