| Date |
Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-04-02 14:47:52 |
Accidental Lovers - Part 2 |
very well written. u might try giving a little more depth to the teachers feelings. |
| 2011-06-30 11:54:10 |
Freshman Year part 2 |
Real fine so far. Break it into paragraphs. Ad in activities of commen interest, that would excite young people. |
| 2011-06-29 11:55:18 |
Siblings Discover True Love |
A
truly great story. The discription of such deep and uncompromising
love, is beyond any I have ever read before. You were blessed by
an extremely wize mother.
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| 2011-06-12 20:20:20 |
Verry Incestuous Relations |
Ha Ha!! Cum coco. I guess you've topped it all. Geobob |
| 2011-05-26 15:55:49 |
The Storm |
What a refreshingly great story. So very well told. Don't think you can write enough of this quality to keep me satisfied. geobob |
| 2010-12-04 12:15:45 |
Tiki Trouble |
crazy,but, very funny. think it deserves a sequal. geobob |
| 2010-12-04 12:15:28 |
Tiki Trouble |
crazy,but, very funny. think it deserves a sequal. geobob |
| 2010-11-28 23:43:16 |
At Home |
hot damn! hot momma. bring on some more. geobob |
| 2010-11-28 23:43:00 |
At Home |
hot damn! hot momma. bring on some more. geobob |
| 2010-11-22 16:00:31 |
A Stepmother\'s Newfound Joy |
Wow! very hot. Bet u stay with that happy ride.
geobob |
| 2010-11-22 15:59:38 |
A Stepmother\'s Newfound Joy |
Wow! very hot. Bet u stay with that happy ride.
geobob |
| 2010-09-24 16:02:50 |
I guess I really DID need a vacation! |
I don't know who the dumbass is that brought politics into this great story,but,hope he keeps it to himself from now on. |
| 2010-04-30 12:01:11 |
Aftermath |
exellent, sounds like the beginning of an very good series! |