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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-12-26 23:04:46 |
Shazza Ch02A - Mo take |
Supposed to be called 'Mo takes me to the.club' |
| 2012-12-23 00:30:27 |
Shazza Ch01 - The Beginning |
its coming the next episode..
I actually took away " and had the text in color but it didn't transfer over here like that.
I did it that way because of the virus or whatever of November "A" for each "
Next chapter i wont remove the " as there is no solution. Maybe i will put chats in brackets.
/shrug ;) |
| 2012-11-28 00:59:33 |
Charity at Work 5 : May I take Your Coat and Cock |
seems like the "A" monster hit you with this story, pity and shame on XNXX for not correcting it. |
| 2012-11-28 00:55:34 |
Charity At Work 2 : Do Fries Come With That? |
We have all screwed up at work before, so has Charity :) |
| 2012-11-17 01:07:32 |
Jessinta Ch03A - The Bully's Moll |
Whats with the A near my " ?????? |
| 2012-11-17 01:07:06 |
Jessinta Ch03A - The Bully's Moll |
Whats with the A near my " ?????? |
| 2012-10-14 01:44:36 |
Alison's Secret life |
Wall of words, makes difficult reading on a small screen. It detract from the story. Seems a good story apart from that. But next time take care of it or ppl will jump down your throat. Happened to me. |
| 2012-10-13 19:53:49 |
Ele: The Rebirth |
Seemed to me like the final chapter or near it, to a longer story, but we seem to be missing the lead up. Well written though. |
| 2012-10-07 20:59:21 |
Going Bi - 5 |
beleive me it has nothing to do with too many parts, it has to do with too many vindictive trolls voting stories down that they dont even try to read. Happens to everyone on here.
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| 2012-10-01 11:29:08 |
Jessinta 01A - The Beginning (reworked) |
You never the word sticky beak, means nosey, stick your beak where you shouldn't. |
| 2012-07-12 00:31:24 |
Digger |
another fine piece of work by the repeat offender ELP :) |
| 2012-06-11 01:43:32 |
JESINTA 7A - School Holidays |
Jess move away from the biker club hench why I stoped naming it Bikerchick and call it Jesinta. She will eventually return there but a few things happen before that. A few new characters fall into place first. I am sorry if it came up as boring, but I hope the next few chapters will became interesting enough for you tp vontinue reading.
Appreciate your comments!! |
| 2012-06-09 11:33:16 |
JESINTA 7A - School Holidays |
OK Ok OK..sure if u dont like my story and vote it down, have the decency and state why. Or do you vote down for your own ego |
| 2012-06-04 00:33:44 |
CAW#11 - Cold Winters Day (re-editted)II |
Maybe i will, do a prequel, but i wasn't planning to but once i take Jesinta story as far as i can, i may just do that.
I was only planning on entering it in CAW and see where it takes me.
I had a few computer issues, thats why it was posted several times, my pc would freeze , when i pressed save and edit later, but it published it 4 times, this one was my final work. I didn't want to risk it posting any more, i know i pissed at least one person off, so i didn't to piss more off. Sorry and my pc apologizes...lol |
| 2012-06-03 14:52:26 |
CAW#11 - Cold Winters Day |
I didnt mean to spam story, it wasnt posted when I re did it. I wasnt happy with it,so I rejigged it. |
| 2012-06-03 14:51:02 |
CAW11 - Cold Winters Night |
Do worry about this one...Caw11 reedit II, is the one to worry about...sorry |
| 2012-06-03 02:48:27 |
CAW#11 - Cold Winters Day (re-editted)II |
Nope, I sent message to delete them, but still no response. If I was able to edit them, which I am not I would. |
| 2012-06-03 00:24:55 |
CAW#11 - Cold Winters Day (re-editted) |
I posted two previous versions with errors while PC was playing up. This is my final offering.. :) forgive me |
| 2012-05-28 19:48:43 |
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I tried making it easier, well I hope I did, as I received some earlier complaints. So I try to really check my stories, double or triple times before releasing them. Means will take longer to post. As long as they keep people interested is the main goal.
;) |
| 2012-05-28 19:06:20 |
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thanks for your messages.
In the upcoming stories Jesinta starts experiencing more and starts spending less time with the club and more at school and school related places. ;) |
| 2012-05-18 00:08:37 |
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Jesinta is drifting from the club as she is confused what and where her future lies, next chapter wasn't called BIKERCHICK as she returned to school. "Jesinta 5" check it out, i accidently blocked comments so comment here until Jesinta 6 is complete, Jes will return to the club, but right now she is more involved with the school. |
| 2012-05-08 01:24:16 |
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If u are going to vote me down, at least have the courtesy of telling me why. |
| 2012-05-08 01:23:02 |
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It would be nice to hear positive or negative comments about my stories, hopefully positive... :) |
| 2012-05-02 10:19:36 |
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Thanks for your comments and i hope i can help u understand somethings.
Jess was molested at 11 by her uncle, which caused some mental issues, briefly stated in Bikerchick 1. Her father left them. Her mother wastes most of her money on slot machines and vodka. They live in a low income area. So $5, may not be much, but it can buy a McDonalds value meal. Or if she hordes the money and get enough, maybe other items. Jess isnt 16 yet so no youth allowance from the government. Yes she has lost her pride but as mention in Bikerchick 1, she was medicate and once she came off them, was frisky most of the time. Fingering herself in class. Yes she does take risks of getting a STD or pregnant, but at 15 she wasn't worried or informed properly about risks.
In chapters to come she will.
I hope that helped fill in some blanks and some of my plots. :) |
| 2012-04-14 08:30:38 |
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Thanks for your comments
They were complimentary and not negative :)
PS i am in the process of re-editing and reposting these, after a XNXX editor checks my grammar and stuff |
| 2012-04-14 08:27:42 |
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Stories are getting redone and reedited by a XNXX editor so they will be longer and hopefully error free.
:) |
| 2012-04-14 08:25:55 |
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Look stop arguing about how bad my grammar or spelling is. I am in the process of redoing all these stories and an XNXX editor is going to correct my mistakes. So you guys can vote me down because or jealous then or bully someone else who had to leave school because of family issues and school was not that important then.
PS.. for those not trying to bring me down, thanks for your comments |
| 2012-04-13 09:25:26 |
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Thanks for your comments.
I never finish 3 form, so hence my grammar mistakes. |
| 2011-11-30 10:54:33 |
My Changing Fortunes (06) |
wow, you have taken a change, and you sound like your loving being used just as much as me. Keep writing makes me wet. |
| 2011-11-03 20:49:00 |
My Changing Fortunes (05) |
wow, what a variety, crossdresser playmates to a 3some.
All the same, hot story series. |
| 2011-11-02 19:28:27 |
My changing fortunes (040 |
Not bad keep em cumming, made me wet reading it and i'm not a gay guy. |
| 2011-10-27 22:16:24 |
My changing fortunes |
I'm a girl and i enjoyed it, something different |
| 2011-01-21 20:25:59 |
Free Spirited..The Beginning (1997) - Moomba |
I know that, but a little stimulation sometime help with nerves |
| 2011-01-12 18:20:06 |
Raping Pam. |
very good, i liked it:) |