Comments from gataki_luv
|2010-08-03 16:10:46||New girl in School part 1||I liked it for the most part. I did how ever find it a tease. be more descriptive. what color was hee hair? How tall was she? How tall wE he? Take a breath, and make your story longer.
oh and write more. I realy want to know what happens next.
|2010-08-03 16:24:45||Just Another Crack Whore||I liked it. It's a story facts don't have to match... and I liked that he added morals into this story.|