| Date |
Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-09-02 20:41:06 |
Serving the Horde |
Maybe, not sure where to go with it.
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| 2012-06-25 20:54:31 |
Amy's Panties- The Beginning-repost |
Good though the switch of tenses if strange and jarring. |
| 2012-06-25 20:11:44 |
Amy's Panties 5 - The Reuinion |
Really exellent, 11 is a little young for my taste but overall very hot. |
| 2012-05-02 20:32:11 |
Succubus Genie part 2 How to solve a problem like Erika |
When I have time/inspiration.
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| 2011-11-21 11:46:53 |
Ramadan. |
A breath of fresh air (albiet heavy with spices) and very well done. |
| 2010-04-09 20:19:28 |
Sara - First time |
Confusing and poorly explained begining. |
| 2010-04-09 20:06:25 |
Internship at AS&S - Chapter 1 |
It seems as though the next chapter will never come, but I live in hope that Everman will return to writing at some point, this is I think the best opening for a sex series I have read, it would be a great shame to let it die. |
| 2010-04-09 20:00:21 |
Teaching Nancy |
Exellent begining, I look forewards to more. Just one thing if you do write a continuation, seperate the sentances with a line not an indentation. Unfortunatly the system does not seem to recognise them, it would just make it easier to read. |
| 2009-12-02 10:53:57 |
Fascination |
Exelent story, there doesn't seem to be a lot on this age group here, mosly older or way too young, this one is about right. |