||I found my sister stripping Ch 7 (really)
||I think John needs to man up and tell his girls to stop playing games. I have never and will NEVER let a girl use sex to get what she wants from me.
If John can't keep his sister happy, then maybe he should just tell her to piss off >.>
||Subjects 0 - CH 2
||I'm loving it mate :). Really good meshing of the stories.
||Gothic Amy and Me Part 4....Kicked out...What Next
||Good story. But you really need to take your time with it. You are making a lot of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. The switch from fucking her pussy to fucking her arse was non existent...
||Dominating my slutty boss
||Very poor structure. I am not even going to bother reading it, even looking at it makes my head hurt.
||Little Amy's first time with Anal as a bonus
||You are... in short... a moron :D
||Deep Sleeper Ch. 05
||God, please write more... I want to see this finish!! lol
||MOM WANTS TO BE MY CUM BUCKET! - CHAPTER 4
||Well, I love it :). It's well written. The story flows quite well. Love the detail you put in.
I personally think you should continue. I want to read about bec getting fucked and maybe Rick bringing home some mates?
I am quite into beastiality as well... so if you could include that too? ^_^
||Deep Sleeper Ch. 05
||I'm loving this story mate :). Keep up the great work. I hope Mark goes back through and DOM's the lot of them *evil grin*
||She Comes With The House
||Yes, please continue :D
||Jennifer's Cum Bath (corrected version)
||I second that, awesome story :). Hoping there is a sequel in the works :D
||lmao, that ending is hilarious. Good story though, paragraphs are well spaced and it is very easy to read :)
||Taking One For The Team 2: On Tour
||You need to work on keeping the separation. Your work is all bunch up in some places, makes it hard to read.
Better to have too much spacing than not enough :)
||Reading Allowed, Pt.1
||Absolutely amazing. Has definitely inspired me for a story now. Just great :D
||Neice on a Leash
||Not bad, alot of gramatical errors and incorrect words used. But a good story :)
||The Slavery Series: Chapter 1
||Very nice. I can't wait to see these little bitches punished some more *evil grin*
Not badly written either :)
||Raped virgin bride
||You need more line breaks and such. I'll actually read the story then.