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Comments from Tom J

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Date Story title Comment
2010-05-12 16:50:51 A Family or Sex Slaves Part 2 It was tough to read, and honestly if reading something is a chore then I lose interest quickly. Please remember that whever someone speaks it means a new paragraph, so that could mean paragraphs of one word to however many is necessary. You divided the story into paragraphs seemingly at random, so I stopped reading pretty quickly. I didn't rate the story positive or negative since I didn't read it all.
2011-04-04 18:04:22 Thanks for the comments everyone, just a couple followups. One, where the hell did all those question marks come from? A bit distracting, but not a part of my story, just a glitch in the system. Second, I do have to admit I'm not entirely happy with the ending, a bit rushed, but it was either that or delete the story as I had lost interest in it. Finally to the fellow who calls sex with young girls "shit", all I can say is you are 100 percent correct, I never have had sex with a young girl, and I never plan to. this is a fantasy and everything contained in the story is what I would consider wrong. Little girls and virgins enjoying sex with nine inch cocks, especially her own father's nine inch cock, just doesn't happen in the real world. They might have the unfortunate experience of being fucked by a monster like that, but I really doubt they would enjoy it. As I prefaced the story, it is make believe.
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