Comments from LordExia

Date Story title Comment
2009-11-05 05:56:43 Hey JackassTales, great story. But why don't you try writing a story without the exaggeration? I know about your disclaimer. But I felt that the protaganist had it too easy, it'll be better if you wrote in parts about coaxing. Because slutwhores that throw themselves at you hardly exist and are hard to relate to. If you made it more believable and ditch the old lady, it'll be great. Because i cant understand how a 12 year old pretty girl would just show her breasts so willingly oor decide to have sex see. Just my 2 cents. Hope to see your better works in the future. =)
2009-11-09 04:08:38 Taking HIs Sister Yes its good but there we have once again a story with "noo, i'm getting rape....hey its FUN!" its getting dry and very sickening. Cant for once get a full rape without the victim enjoying it?
2009-11-05 19:41:53 Yes, i fully agree, spelling errors softens the dick. And also, the general trend which is so sad around here is that the writers all make the story too unbelievable. As though every pre-teen girl was sexually aggressive. The protaganists around here all don't need to work for it. I think stories would be better if they had described abit on how the main guy coaxes the girl or how he plans his rape etc...
2009-11-07 22:21:56 Young Lust, First Lust. Sweet Devotion. I agree with the guy. THis belongs a love novel. This is kinda softcore. But i seriosuly applaud the writing. *claps*
2009-11-07 22:23:18 Unfatomable fantasies I - Rape of Amelia and Yen Yi (Part 1) Hi, firstly thanks for reading my story! Its my first one. And if you thought it was good, do leave a comment telling me why so i can continue to apply it and if you thought i wasnt, please tell me why to, i'd like to improve. thanks