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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-07-03 11:33:05 |
A Reasonable Deal (Pt. 8--Finale) |
I loved all the series...but, I have to say that the last installment was disappointed. Well written and constructed, of course. But I didn't like the turn of events. It seems incoherent to me. Anyhow, i respect your narrating choice!! Hope to read more from you!
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| 2011-12-02 13:57:49 |
Hijabi Wife |
To Anonymous reader2011-12-02 07:14:23:
as I stated this story is fiction. There is no intent to judge anyone. (Btw, even if it was true, who am I to judge?) There is also no intent to being racist. It is set in an islamic coutry for 2 reasons:
1) my trip to Morocco is real and inspired this story
2) the stirctness about religion adds spice to the story.
That's all. Just to be clear. |
| 2011-11-02 11:01:08 |
How to pay the rent |
Great story!!! You must go on!!! |
| 2011-07-27 10:23:03 |
OFFICE SURPRISE |
Incredible story. Very good indeed. I'm not really a fan of domination and submission, but i liked it very much. I love how you write!!! |
| 2011-07-26 04:05:52 |
Dirty Girl |
Very well written!! I like more complex plots but i liked it very much.
Intense! |
| 2011-07-18 08:38:25 |
Pictures: 2 |
This was very good!!! Improved with respect to the previous one. I'm waiting for more...
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| 2011-07-18 08:20:23 |
Pictures |
The idea is really good!!! But, as the other guy said, you shoud put more description in it... Keep writing though... |
| 2011-02-05 05:44:58 |
Paige's Life - How It Began (1) |
Very well written!!! And excellent start...can't wait for part 2!! Anyhow, if you accept a tip, I'd have put some action in this chapter already.... |
| 2010-09-11 10:50:15 |
Making the cheer squad |
one of the best in teen female-teen female I've read so far....keep'em coming... |
| 2010-07-28 07:47:18 |
Snap Shot pt 1 |
Hi...I hope you will write a sequel...I'm waiting for it.... |
| 2010-05-10 03:51:57 |
Money buys everything |
Very good story!!! Loved the idea!! |
| 2010-05-10 03:51:41 |
Money buys everything 2 |
Awesome!! One of the best story I've read so far!! Waiting for more!! I loved the way you switched between present and past... Great writing!! |
| 2010-05-10 03:49:57 |
Money buys everything |
Very good story!!! Loved the idea!! |