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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2011-11-27 01:50:42 |
"Fundi bomba aliponifira!" |
This is actually in Swahili, and if you use Chrome you can just hit the translate button...it's about a plumber coming over...but, really...you should post it in English on this site...:) |
| 2011-10-19 23:38:09 |
DADDY'S POEM |
This poem is called "Daddy's Day" and was written by Cheryl Costello-Forshey in 2000...you should credit the author, or else it's just stealing... |
| 2011-10-19 22:22:08 |
Fair Rose of All Seasons |
Nice job here Pete...did I by any chance read this with a different name? Could be my imagination...:) |
| 2010-09-05 14:22:17 |
I Dream |
Nice Miss Bunny...:) |
| 2010-07-16 16:14:08 |
The Ass Cushion |
Hey Vyle...generally not a huge fan of your poems...but, this made me chuckle... |
| 2010-05-18 07:51:11 |
Jen in the Club |
I think you did a nice job on this...I like it, not sure why nobody else seems to... |
| 2010-04-05 22:15:14 |
Diane |
Very nicely done, ejls...I feel like I just got back from school...if you ever decide to teach night classes and are looking for students, let me know...maybe I can take a refresher course...lol.. I liked the way you alternated the action with Diane's own reservations about what she was doing...again, very well done... |
| 2010-03-31 10:41:05 |
My Special Friend |
Nice job Mistress Bunny...very heartfelt and well written... |
| 2009-11-27 10:53:04 |
Together |
Wonderful story Jacquie...as usual... |
| 2009-11-19 04:48:46 |
i am a slave |
powerful stuff...I like... |
| 2009-11-19 04:47:06 |
Cherished |
I agree with Piquet...nice poem...you need to structure it...but you are good with words...you have talent...nice job... |
| 2009-11-19 04:40:51 |
Black Candles |
I agree with Pete...I thought it nice too...Exakta66... |
| 2009-11-09 20:08:44 |
Young Lust, First Lust. Sweet Devotion. |
I didn't think hardcore sexual descriptions belonged in a 'first time' story...that is why I wrote it the way I did...the story is largely true...completely up until the phone call, then it becomes a composite...Exakta66... |
| 2009-10-23 14:27:30 |
Desire |
Your poems are epic...a bit dark at times, but epic...good stuff... |
| 2009-10-17 17:20:28 |
Moonlight and Roses |
Shame to have to come down to Earth after that... |