||Rich Bitch Balckmail - pt 4 repost
||If you want to chat you can kik me at 1cyclops1. I have been known to take requests.
||When lust takes over
||I wish I could read French so I could read the original.
||No aliens, just a split in humanity. One branch becoming smaller and more social, the other continuing as is. I envision this taking place 3000 years in the future.
Thank you for the nomenclature reminder and the comment.
||Seducing My Virgin Sister
||You have great potential but your writing is stilted. Put away the thesaurus for a bit and just flow with it. Work details in tangentially.
The two biggest suggestions I have are read more and write more.
||Rex's New Pet Pt 3
||Don't worry, Rex would never "share" Beth. Beth would obediently do it if asked but Rex wouldn't. I had that in place to build tension. I guess I built a a little too much.
||I will start to write that next. I just need to re-read and find where I left off and pick a direction
||Also if anyone has something that they want written I take requests.
||Sorry about the way it ended guys (and gals) I was almost to what you see as the end and had to go to the party. 1:30 am and drunk off my ass I thought it would be a good idea to finish and post. Whoops.
||The Beauty of Friendship
||The "A's" are quote marks. It probably looks okay to her.