Comments from abd Lover

Date Story title Comment
2010-04-15 15:35:51 Twins --And ones a virgin Thanks for the constructive comments, I'll do better on the paragraphs next story. and thanks for not beating me up, after all, this is my first try at writing. Yes, perhaps there is a follow-up with Molly and Sarah. This a lot of fun!
2010-05-13 11:00:33 I Want To Make Love Too I don't often bother to leave comments, but this was without a doubt the most true to life sexual experience in a young girls life I've read in a long time. The author took time to develop the characters so you felt you really knew the girl. I sincerely hope to read more from this author!
2011-05-13 16:02:37 Ranch Life Part 1 This was not only erotic, but fun to read, as thetwo of them had a banter going on that was friendly, not mean-spirited like so many stories.