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| 2013-05-06 01:57:42 |
Three Can Keep a Secret if Two are...Angry |
Damn, I can't wait for the real reason why she can't go "yet". This feels like the third to last chapter in the series. Am I right? :) |
| 2013-03-16 05:29:30 |
Three Can Keep a Secret if Two are...Servicing the Plan |
Damn you! This chapter was absolutely thrilling! I was on my nerves when the "dream" began (was it really a dream??), decided to go to bed, but just couldn't. Had to come back and read the whole thing. Bravo! |
| 2012-08-28 07:29:18 |
fucking a pregnant Elizabeth |
As everyone is saying, you have a great base for a story there, but your execution was terrible. Rewrite it with more care, please, and we'll be all eager to read it. |
| 2012-08-27 22:58:03 |
Camping With Mom - Part 4 |
PLEASE, make them go back home, and keep doing it. Start out hiding from the father, then make him acknowledge it. Turn the father into the cuckold, as your stories are tagged. He'll lick his son's balls while his wife is getting banged, and clean her up after they're done. That would be awesome, and give way for at least 2 more stories. :) |
| 2012-05-13 23:38:47 |
Three Can Keep a Secret if Two are...Fucking like Bunnies |
I hope you're ok to write the next chapter soon. :) |
| 2012-04-08 22:45:41 |
Three Can Keep a Secret if Two are...Sisters |
#WhiteHat -- Thanks for the reply. It's good to know you have a plan. I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter. :) |
| 2012-04-07 01:00:05 |
Three Can Keep a Secret if Two are...Sisters |
Although it's a good story, I think the plan took is too distracting and unconvincing. The first story made us empathize with Ron, and enjoy Kim's wit, while they taught Rachel a lesson. This second one pulls a crazy plan with which first story's Kim could never have agreed on.
Maybe on the third chapter things could turn away from that plan and they could focus on breaking Rachel as a sex toy. Have Petrov killed or one of Rachel's bags contain the money, which they deliver to the mob, along with precious info on Petrov. Then have they teach Rachel a lesson on keeping the truth away from them while risking everyone's lives. That would be fun. :) |
| 2012-04-02 18:35:34 |
Three Can Keep a Secret if Two are...in Love |
Awesome story. Please, damn, please make a part two.
You got a fan right here. |
| 2011-06-09 23:04:48 |
FAMILY FUCKING FUN |
Great story. Liked all your suggestions, except the bestiality. Anal, Bi and WS would be fun. ;D |