Comments from dsnabsp
|2009-11-14 11:05:16||Predator Series: The Beginning: Chapter 3||To the "hott" reader, ;).
Sorry all my characters and stories are laid out already. She is actually made by a friend of mine and also. That character is not young, not a granny but not under the age of 25, and seeing how she acts and dresses, it just wouldn't fit her being a virgin. I will tell you this, There will be a virgin in story 4. Seems like a long ways away but theres tons of virgin stories to tie you over till then, ;). Also the more positive votes/comments I get, the more inclined I will be to write more. I like to people enjoy my work. Have a good day.
|2009-11-18 20:06:24||Predator Series: The Beginning: Chapter 1||Question to all the readers who give it a negative. What could make the story better for you? Dont just leave a negative rating and not tell the author why. Please let me know so I can become a better author. I take positive criticism well.|
|2009-11-23 20:54:06||Predator Series: The Beginning: Chapter 3||Sorry I am a slow author. I am working on it dont worry. On another note, do you have any thoughts on the story thus far? besides it made you wet of course ha ha ha....|
|2009-11-30 23:02:41||Predator Series: The Beginning: Chapter 3||LoL believe it or not its well spell checked, just the grammar is not that great. The first threee was me basicly testing the waters of XNXX. The 4th story is getting off to a slow start atm because I am waiting on my editor to finish editing the first 3 stories so I can repost them with corrected grammer and tense. Yes the story is rushed in some spots but as much detail as the story is, about 9300 words or so, can let the few scenes that are fast slide alil ;). I also thank any positive criticism provided. and comments are always welcome. If you would like to send me idea or suggestions on anything you can do so at email@example.com|
|2010-04-30 21:16:06||Predator Series: The Beginning: Chapter 3||i have finished more chapters, reader, if you want to read the next chapter, you can contact me if your wish|