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| 2011-11-09 01:26:45 |
The Egocentric King - Part one |
The last part of this chapter can be fount on my website
phreak-nation.com/stories/content/wip-egocentric-king |
| 2011-06-18 03:43:05 |
Predator Series: Chapter Eight: Echos of Lust |
Well I have created the website for my readers. This will allow me more customization of my stories as when I publish a story here it is locked and I can not make changes. Also will allow users to see what all is going on. I have uploaded all of my stories to the website and is a lot easier to navigate through them. The look of the website will eventually change but for now its decent enough.
Also when I finish a story it will be pushed there first. I hope every enjoies the site and I know its easier for most to view this site so I will not stop posting here. Just if you want an added bonus feel free to visit my website below.
stories.phreak-nation.com |
| 2011-06-16 21:33:40 |
Predator Series: Chapter Eight: Echos of Lust |
Yeah I understand how that could be confusing which if you noticed it almost came back some in this chapter. Just remember this is from the perspective of the "Predator" view so the prey wont have much character to her. There will be a lot more interaction from her in later chapters as she is going through a mental mind f**k which is to be expected in this type of scenario. Also note that there will be a "sister" series for this series and that will be the "Preys" side of view.
Also note I will not stop writing this series. I enjoy this series and the more I hear from readers the more it makes me want to write even more. I do how ever really want to setup a website as a reader has volunteered to draw some images for the story which I want to the users to enjoy the visual aspect of the story when ever the reader gets the images done. Until then you guys will have to suffer your imaginations ;). Also will allow users to directly interact with me, and maybe effect how the story happens |
| 2011-06-16 07:41:11 |
Predator Series: Chapter Eight: Echos of Lust |
As stated I will be making a website just for these stories. Also I said I am >unsure< if I will keep posting them here or not. Still on the edge about that. |
| 2011-06-16 03:30:54 |
Predator Series: Chapter Eight: Echos of Lust |
Hope my readers are enjoying the story thus far. To stay current and know when a story is released, facebook me at facebook.com/phreak.nation. Also I will be getting web space soon for the stories as they will then be moved there. Not sure if I will keep posting here or not. |
| 2011-06-09 02:10:31 |
Predator Series: Chapter Seven: Lust Machine |
Also the Story is mapped out mostly already. Its not a lack of ideas but rather I want it to go slow. I want this story to last a bit longer and actually have meaning. Its not like the thousand of other stories on here, but rather has a story and dialog and the tid bits you would find in a normal book versus a fuck flick |
| 2011-06-09 02:08:10 |
Predator Series: Chapter Seven: Lust Machine |
Anon about the positive rating. Give it if the story deserves. It is slow because it is being wrote as a book. It is VERY slow but it is building up to everything. As far as more sex, that will be granted. As far as longer and faster. Well I will let the main character handle that side of things ;) |
| 2011-06-08 16:18:39 |
Predator Series: Chapter Seven: Lust Machine |
If you are going to give a negative rating please let me know as to why you are doing this. Maybe I can improve on the story. This is a writing experience for me and any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. Thank you in Advanced. |
| 2010-12-29 18:38:23 |
Predator Series: Chapter Six: Sadophillia |
Sorry about that. There is no real explanation on that
Female Domination could imply both a dominating female and a female being dominated. Sorry for the confustion. I will make sure future stories reflect that. |
| 2010-12-28 21:46:20 |
Predator Series: Chapter Six: Sadophillia |
If you are going to leave a negative comment, PLEASE, please let me know why. Thank you in advance. |
| 2010-12-28 21:45:36 |
Predator Series: Chapter Six: Sadophillia |
If you are going to leave a negative comment, PLEASE, please let me know why you are giving a negative rating. Thank you |
| 2010-12-28 21:35:57 |
Predator Series: Chapter Six: Sadophillia |
If you are going to leave a negative comment, PLEASE, please let me know why you are giving a negative rating. Thank you |
| 2010-11-20 16:33:02 |
Predator Series: Chapter Five: Oh what fun |
If you are going to leave a negative comment, PLEASE, please let me know why. This is also a setup chapter. It does not involve much anything. |
| 2010-04-30 21:16:06 |
Predator Series: The Beginning: Chapter 3 |
i have finished more chapters, reader, if you want to read the next chapter, you can contact me if your wish |
| 2009-11-30 23:02:41 |
Predator Series: The Beginning: Chapter 3 |
LoL believe it or not its well spell checked, just the grammar is not that great. The first threee was me basicly testing the waters of XNXX. The 4th story is getting off to a slow start atm because I am waiting on my editor to finish editing the first 3 stories so I can repost them with corrected grammer and tense. Yes the story is rushed in some spots but as much detail as the story is, about 9300 words or so, can let the few scenes that are fast slide alil ;). I also thank any positive criticism provided. and comments are always welcome. If you would like to send me idea or suggestions on anything you can do so at phreaknation@gmail.com |
| 2009-11-23 20:54:06 |
Predator Series: The Beginning: Chapter 3 |
Sorry I am a slow author. I am working on it dont worry. On another note, do you have any thoughts on the story thus far? besides it made you wet of course ha ha ha.... |
| 2009-11-18 20:06:24 |
Predator Series: The Beginning: Chapter 1 |
Question to all the readers who give it a negative. What could make the story better for you? Dont just leave a negative rating and not tell the author why. Please let me know so I can become a better author. I take positive criticism well. |
| 2009-11-14 11:05:16 |
Predator Series: The Beginning: Chapter 3 |
To the "hott" reader, ;).
Sorry all my characters and stories are laid out already. She is actually made by a friend of mine and also. That character is not young, not a granny but not under the age of 25, and seeing how she acts and dresses, it just wouldn't fit her being a virgin. I will tell you this, There will be a virgin in story 4. Seems like a long ways away but theres tons of virgin stories to tie you over till then, ;). Also the more positive votes/comments I get, the more inclined I will be to write more. I like to people enjoy my work. Have a good day. |