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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2009-11-21 15:50:32 |
My neighbor and her young daughters - chp 1,2,3 |
Hot story. Enjoyed it. |
| 2009-11-19 17:56:33 |
Life and Times of a Pain Whore |
Good story. Would enjoy some more. |
| 2009-11-03 14:37:42 |
Drive-in Rape - Chapter 1 |
Hmm. The martial arts mistake was pretty stupid, esp since I do know the difference.
For the other comment... How would you have me improve the writing? If it was just because you did not like the subject matter, then I really don't care.
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| 2009-10-30 17:18:42 |
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Extremely well written story. Great job. |
| 2009-10-30 13:59:37 |
11th Birthday |
If you don't like the story, don't read it. Clearly fantasy since the author is not a woman. Just a misuse of the "writtenbywomen" tag. |
| 2009-10-30 13:07:07 |
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Hmm. Interesting fantasy that would not have occurred to me. But a good story. Will go back and read part 1 |
| 2009-10-30 13:02:15 |
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Not a bad story. Please put more whitespace between paragraphs to improve readability.
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| 2009-10-28 14:28:31 |
The Slave Trainers--Part Three |
Excellent story. Going to look up the rest of the series. |
| 2009-09-11 18:49:33 |
Father and Son Games PT2 |
Really enjoyed the story. Please keep them coming. |
| 2009-09-11 17:02:08 |
Father and Son Games PT1 |
Really enjoyed the story. On to the next one. |
| 2009-09-11 15:35:25 |
My Childhood Training PT1 |
Love it!! On to the next one. |
| 2009-09-04 15:36:38 |
my new submissive family - Part 3 Tom & Mary's initiation |
Quite enjoyable.. Keep it up. |