Comments from Aviat
|2009-09-26 04:08:39||Sexually Frustrated Wife||You alternated between First- and Second-Person.
Either is fine, but stick with only one.
Otherwise nicely done.
|2009-09-26 04:18:02||The Assification of Johannah||Both thumbs up here!|
|2010-06-21 23:21:15||Amber won't do it again (Sequel)||Mission accomplished!|
|2011-10-22 05:50:17||My Sister In Law Beth, Chapters 9 - 13||Read the whole series in one swell foop.;-)
Keep up the good work, and it's great to know you're situation is improved.
All the best.