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Comment |
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| 2011-09-24 07:45:27 |
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Good work girl....loved it :) |
| 2011-09-24 07:25:28 |
Coping with Retirement |
Off to an AWESOME start, and going to be a very promising series. YES, people...it WILL be a series :)
I am only a very little slightly disappointed that you didn't "nail down" ages as we discussed in emails...especially Lrttie's, but only a very LITTLE disappointed :)
Looking forward to next park....keep up the good work,. I will continue to advise....and THANK YOU for your help with my Marie story :) Almost done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) |
| 2011-09-17 08:46:50 |
Loss and Gain: Chapter Eight |
um....next part please??? |
| 2011-09-09 08:02:51 |
Loss and Gain: Chapter Eight |
Katie should have squatted over Samantha's mouth after making her daughter cum, and spread the girl's ass cheeks for John :)
Just sayin'... :) LOVE IT AND PLEASE HURRY with next!!!!! |
| 2011-09-06 06:33:16 |
Becky's Ordeal with her Bad Teachers |
As good as all the other chapter in this series. You have hit another homerun as far as I am concerned, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here. :) A+++ |
| 2011-08-30 07:25:24 |
Loss and Gain: Chapter Eight |
As EXCELLENT as the other chapters...keep it goin!!!! A+++++ |
| 2011-08-23 05:20:51 |
Becky confesses to ravishing a younger girl |
Positive rating from ME!!! :) Wow...quite a nice sping on my "Mall" story...and I have to admit that I personally think it was even BETTER than mine :)
Props to you...keep at it mister :) |
| 2011-08-05 06:13:06 |
Daddy's Vengeance and his Family Values |
Keep it going :) This could turn into a 50 part series...lol. Looking forward to "seeing" Sally with the 2 younger girls and Yvonne :) |
| 2011-07-27 20:33:24 |
Daddy avenges his daughter, Part 3 of 3 |
Absolutely...without a doubt in my mind whatsoever...the BEST story I have read here in a LONG time (my apologies to other authors) :) WOW WOW WOW!!! I noticed the age snafu as well, but it was quickly dismissed as I kept on cumming!!! Thank you, and I say leave it be. Make US imagine what happens next :)
A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ |
| 2010-11-21 07:06:05 |
My Little Sister Sophie (Parts 1 & 2) |
Great story and I certainly HOPE there is more :) |
| 2010-11-21 06:59:52 |
My Little Sister Sophie (Parts 1 & 2) |
Great story and I certainly HOPE there is more :) |
| 2010-11-21 06:59:22 |
My Little Sister Sophie (Parts 1 & 2) |
Great story and I certainly HOPE there is more :) |
| 2010-11-21 06:59:11 |
My Little Sister Sophie (Parts 1 & 2) |
Great story and I certainly HOPE there is more :) |
| 2009-08-18 09:21:50 |
The 16-Year-Old-Tease at Play |
Nice! I wish I read it before part 2 though. |