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2010-04-21 08:38:23 Raped By My Step Dad - Part 5: Again and Again I really don't understand the readers (none of which were forced to read this ) condemning "Meghan" for wanting/needing to tell her story.
I would really like to hear how "Meghan" coped with this child hood trauma and then loss of her step father whose "love & attention" she had come to thrive on.
2010-12-03 16:32:45 I told her Nice beginning, now fill in the back story to build up the characters...... Why is she out begging/prostituting, does she have a home or is she living on the streets ? Who is he besides a mall cop ? married,family man, or a lonely man looking for someone to take care of ? What's her "you remind me of my daddy" story ? There is so many ways you can take this story. I look forward to the next chapter.
2010-12-03 16:33:17 I told her Nice beginning, now fill in the back story to build up the characters...... Why is she out begging/prostituting, does she have a home or is she living on the streets ? Who is he besides a mall cop ? married,family man, or a lonely man looking for someone to take care of ? What's her "you remind me of my daddy" story ? There is so many ways you can take this story. I look forward to the next chapter.
2010-12-03 16:33:42 I told her Nice beginning, now fill in the back story to build up the characters...... Why is she out begging/prostituting, does she have a home or is she living on the streets ? Who is he besides a mall cop ? married,family man, or a lonely man looking for someone to take care of ? What's her "you remind me of my daddy" story ? There is so many ways you can take this story. I look forward to the next chapter.
2010-12-03 16:37:31 I told her Nice beginning, now build the characters.
Who is she, does she have a home or is she living on the streets ? Why is she out begging/hooking ? What is her "you remind me of my daddy" story ?
Who is he besides a mall cop ? Does he have a wife or family or is he just a lonely wanna be cop that lives alone ?
So many ways you can you can take this story... I know where I see it going..... looking forward to the next chapter to see where you go.
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