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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2010-07-12 02:50:01 |
Temptation |
omg welcome back. i must say i missed ur writing.
reading this is like a dream. i just couldn't turn away.
please continue asap. i hate the long wait |
| 2010-03-21 17:23:04 |
Amy's Deception |
good story i like how u have the whole twin thing going.
keep it up |
| 2008-11-14 15:12:11 |
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nice story but it is so god damn hard to read with out paragraphs!11 |
| 2008-10-18 22:14:33 |
My Neighbors 2 |
hey, i dont mean to seem like a nagging bitch but...
how is work coming along with the other stories |
| 2008-08-09 00:20:14 |
My Sister Ashley: The Birthday Bash |
Oh i was just wondering.
the future is good but i also love the teenage horse play |
| 2008-08-08 01:32:22 |
My Sister Ashley: The Birthday Bash |
QUESTION
just wondering if u are gonna keep the older tim and ashley theme going or are u gonna go back to the teen years? |
| 2008-08-08 01:30:01 |
My Sister Ashley: The Birthday Bash |
hey great story been
interesting concept taking them into the future, would have liked it if there was more teenage adventures
BUT STILL AWESOME STORY |
| 2008-08-04 12:07:27 |
Internship at AS&S - Chapter 1 |
hot |
| 2008-08-04 00:11:19 |
MSA Omnibus (1-10) |
oh i just thought of an idea just as i finished reading it
for some of the next chapters how about tim and ashley go to a family reunion
not saying add another family member but just have the obstacle of ashley's sex drive at the thing |
| 2008-07-31 08:06:25 |
MSA Omnibus (1-10) |
does any one else notice that this story is only msa 1-9???
he didn't put ten in there |
| 2008-07-27 01:23:12 |
My Summer Boss 10 |
ya i do like a good tragedy now and then like the 'end of the world' series
that was an awesome story |
| 2008-07-24 00:38:27 |
My Summer Boss 10 |
im sorry rickjames but i think kelly's presence in the story is a key factor, or else its some guy who fucks his girlfriend and boss A LOT. it would be stale fast if von got rid of eve and kelly and tried to continue the series.
but by college i can see eve being a faded memory to tom and jade kinda taking her place in a way. |
| 2008-07-22 00:56:05 |
My Neighbors |
Does anybody else think it would be interesting to see a blaending of the 3 universes of MSA MSB MN into one story or into a chapter or two in one of the series? |
| 2008-07-21 17:52:47 |
My Summer Boss 10 |
does anybody else think it would be interesting to see a blaending of the 3 universes of MSA MSB MN into one story or into a chapter or two in one of the series
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| 2008-07-21 16:05:00 |
My Neighbors |
great
canty wait for more
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| 2008-07-20 00:01:20 |
My Summer Boss 10 |
i can see see how writing this may get stale but from a readers aspect it marvelous. i have a gift. and with the guy below that might be an interesting blend of having tim and ashley meet tom and brook.
i hope ur new series will have the great success as ur others.
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| 2008-07-16 13:03:29 |
My Summer Boss 10 |
great job as always
nice thing with kelly and all
enjoy the break |
| 2008-07-16 11:21:45 |
Just Perfect |
thnx
well in part 2 its continuing the incest but the story isnt completely based on incest but the cousin a constant character. but i dont plan on a lot of sex between them |
| 2008-07-15 23:48:01 |
A boy and his sister's best friend... in love |
pretty good |
| 2008-07-14 19:02:24 |
My Summer Boss 9 |
when is ten gonna come our way? |
| 2008-07-14 10:48:25 |
just perfect |
i meant to post this as a fiction story not dark fantasy |
| 2008-07-14 10:37:20 |
just perfect |
so what did guys u think?
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| 2008-07-12 10:54:13 |
Just Perfect ( teaser) preview |
well i just sent it for validation last night
so it should be up soon |
| 2008-07-11 11:58:37 |
Just Perfect ( teaser) preview |
hey this is only a preveiw of the story and i will have the finished up soon.
-pwny |
| 2008-07-08 16:45:56 |
MSA Omnibus (1-10) |
hey Von just an idea. if u are able to write some more parts of the sereis, i am just thinking, that a good ending might be a flash into the future and show what happened to the whole bunch like how did both the relationships w/ ashley and oriana work out, and so on. but, basically as a look of what happened to future, adult tim and maybe have an ending like he cathes his kid fucking, have auntie ashely come visit alot. and toward the ending maybe have ashely speak for the both of them thinking she is doing the right thing by exsposing the relationship that she and tim have to their parents. maybe have some close calls on campus, ashely brings her new lady or borfriend home, have tim and oriana try to leave to go on a little weekend get away that gets interupted. just throwing out ideas
but these are all opinion. o and i thnk a conflict between sarah and ashely, oriana, tish, or whoever just to back with tim would be nice, but thats just me. |
| 2008-07-08 16:30:46 |
Me and Jacqui (The 1st Time) |
good but need more detail |
| 2008-07-08 11:47:32 |
My sister Ashley chapter 10 |
hey Von just an idea. if u are able to write some more parts of the sereis, i am just thinking, that a good ending might be a flash into the future and show what happened to the whole bunch like how did both the relationships w/ ashley and oriana work out, and so on. but, basically as a look of what happened to future, adult tim and maybe have an ending like he cathes his kid fucking, have auntie ashely come visit alot. and toward the ending maybe have ashely speak for the both of them thinking she is doing the right thing by exsposing the relationship that she and tim have.
but these are all opinion. o and i thnk a conflict between sarah and ashely or oriana would be nice, but thats just me. |
| 2008-07-08 11:32:54 |
Kelly's Heroes Chapter 2 |
this story, UR FIRST!??!!?!?!, is just amazingly goood
the plot is good, the grammar i think is good, the whole story over all is good.
just wondering how does one pronounce Petr? i understand petra but petr? |
| 2008-07-07 11:01:19 |
My Summer Boss 9 |
wait wtf
no MSA ever??!!??!?!?!?!?!?! |
| 2008-06-30 18:15:07 |
Kelly's Heroes Chapter 1 |
fucking awesome man |
| 2008-06-19 16:50:06 |
MSA Omnibus (1-10) |
hey i didnt read the whole thing i jus skipped it in like 2 seconds thinking its the the whole series put into one.
so wat i am asking is that is this the whole series put into one story same events and all, or is there other goodies Von put in here???? |
| 2008-06-19 10:08:14 |
Internship at AS&S - Chapter 1 |
omfg
this story is amazing |
| 2008-06-12 20:02:42 |
My summer Boss 8 |
if this was a movie .....
best movie ever
seriously make it a screenplay |
| 2008-06-09 00:23:58 |
My summer Boss 8 |
got to bring back the sister
her role as the villian is brilliant
i am jus saying i would pesonally like to see kelly TRY to have her way with tom again
other than that great story |
| 2008-05-07 21:24:56 |
My summer Boss 6 |
gr8 story
when can we expect 7? |
| 2008-04-27 00:20:17 |
My sister Ashley chapter 10 |
i know what u mean
i wish i had ashley as my sister |
| 2008-04-27 00:19:12 |
My summer Boss 6 |
may = msb7??? |