||A HEAVEN FOR NINA
||Oh, and Ghostrider might be right about literary works. But honestly, it's too bad that people can't appreciate the story for what it is.
||A HEAVEN FOR NINA
||Really good, HD. It did have a few mistakes that I know you would've picked up on in a proofread, but none of them detracted from a very warm story. The characterization was finely drawn.
||Excellent! The characterization and descriptions were perfect. You did a wonderful job of mimicking the dialogue and tone -- and certain playfulness -- of the Arabian Nights.
||Hey PP. I had encountered some of your posts on the forum in the stories threads, so I thought I would check out your stories. I'm not much into lesbian stories, although I do like bdsm, so I thought I would start with this one. I quite enjoyed it. I really liked reading about Arthur's exhibitionism. Very erotic!
||The Tribunal 2.
||Brilliant. Heart-breaking, erotic, well put together. As with other stories of yours I've read, you create strong characters with very few words. It's a joy to read your stories.
||Excellent. Well-written, great characterization. Nice little twist.
||My new Possession!
||Amber is a lucky girl! You can just tell that she longs to be dominated.
||You've always had strong characters in your stories and this is just another example. Extreme. I hope you keep writing.
||Just one girl.....
||Great job, Janey. As someone above me said, every now and then, a quickie is just the thing. The only thing that tripped me up was that when you said "lounge," I was thinking of a coffee shop type lounge. So when she pulled up her shirt, I thought "Wow, she's brave" -- but that was also kind of exciting :-) I enjoyed reading it.
||The actual writing in this story could use some work. You veer between present tense and past tense. It was better when you settled on past tense (the natural tense for telling a story).
I like the story itself. The bdsm stuff, including the humiliation, is very hot. I liked some of the things he did to her and the language you used to describe it. A Master indeed.
||I Give My Niece A Ride
||I liked the story a lot. It isn't a stereotypical "my wife hates sex" story. Very realistic. The only thing I didn't like is the use of the word "kitty" instead of pussy or the even stronger word cunt. But that is my personal preference. Great story!
||The Object of My Desire
||I definitely like bondage stuff, and this is a great beginning. Great writing!
||I get wet every time I read this. Your descriptions are so vivid. Absolutely the best writer on this site. Cher's pretty lucky ;-)
||Good story. I enjoyed it!
||Island For Three, Chapter 5
||You're an excellent writer. I'm enjoying the story. Thanks for writing!
||Cindy Ella (A Modern Fairy Tale)
||Great writing -- some good stuff. I loved the part about Tuna Helper :-)
||A Day In the Woods
||Fantastic! Very hot story. Keep writing.... please.