Comments from Ed Itor
|2010-04-17 17:53:56||A Very Difficult Daughter||One of the best that I keep rereading.
I am sure that you had posted it at another site where I first read it & was glad to find it here to-day.
|2010-05-28 22:00:31||Young Fun #2||So what will middle sister do when she finds out?|
|2010-06-14 18:01:17||A Kind Stranger part 1 & 2||BRAVO!
A Very Good and well written story.
For those that wished it was true, you paid the author one of the highest compliments a reader could. It proved that touching the human spirit is something that can be achieved.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
|2011-06-12 16:14:37||Defying My Family||Good story, you just have to keep your thoughts straight. You have him kicking the guy but say I fell to the ground.
Best way to write a story is use a word proggie with grammar & spell check (though it would not find the example i gave) and then paste it here.
|2011-08-13 18:33:04||Ranchland - Chapter 1||It seems no one has picked up that Ben & his sister were adopted, so maybe they themselves were not blood related thus making his niece fair game.
Keep the story going and make it a love story as well as about their sexual coming together. Let them discover each other and grow while keeping the kinkiness down.
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