Comments from Ed Itor

Date Story title Comment
2013-01-26 23:26:44 In the Valley of the Amazons-3:Hosi's Challenge I agree that this was another great instalment but think that you should have postponed it a few chapters. That though is just my 2¢ worth, I think that soon we will have another snake in the grass when the 5 new men join up, as not all might be willing to live by women's rules. That could have been a reason that Reta used for her attempted coup d'état.
2013-01-31 00:19:39 Modern Mage Chapter 23 A great adventure and a good way to complete it but not end the story.
2013-02-01 22:51:20 The Existence - Chapter 2 We need a few more of Existence after the losses of Modern Mage's last chapter, to explain how Arthur and the bar handled it.
Maybe have him modernize it with POS and computers, etc.
2013-02-03 00:25:38 This has been an enjoyable read and yes you do make fewer mistakes word wise now. Most grammatical checks don't pick up wrong words being used (MS Word does, probably only thing MS ever got almost correct. :lol) but there is a freebie called AbiWord that is very good and a lot like Word only better as it is not MS.
2013-02-10 09:47:07 Eternal Darkness: Chapter Seven Mishi; did you ever think that maybe he let his desk get messy and sat his lappy precariously knowing that you would feel the need to clean just to get a new PC?
As for what is on the disc drive a reputable PC repair shop should be able to recover all on it if they actually know what they are doing.
Capitias; way to go bro, you actually got a woman to mea culpa & get a new laptop. You are a god amongst men. :lol: