Comments from Ed Itor

Date Story title Comment
2012-11-10 16:39:17 Strawberry (Chap 10) I'm just sorry that this became more about others then Strawberry and her momma. You should have called these stories "Kelly's Tail" and "Three Little ..."
But at least you didn't leave us dangling.
2012-11-23 10:39:18 A Normal Family: Chapter One This whole story was a blow job commited by the author.
2012-12-20 08:54:36 My cousin Lili (Part 1) Is he her cousin or uncle? once ti got to that conflict I stopped reading, sorry mate.
Negative from me.
2013-01-18 01:21:28 Modern Mage - A Hunter's Dilemma A good filler and it adds another dimension to these tales as it lets us know how Roarke, and maybe even others, thinks outside of the main story line.
2013-01-20 00:03:08 Modern Mage Chapter 19 Okay guy get your arse over here so that I can strike you.
This was a good chapter, I am surprised that you made her a Daywalker, as I just assumed that you were writing based upon True Vampires. If you read Dracula you will see that he went out in the day time. Night only Vampires are an invention of Hollywood.
I again await the next edition and say write on.